ITS HURT BUT I WILL NOT GIVE UP

DATING AGENCY

 

"Its hurt, really hurt to see that just now~".Jonghyun said ~

 

His face turn out from cheer to frust.Maybe he don't have any chance anymore?.He can't think anything right now.He just walk till he stop when he coincidenly saw the face he want to avoid start from 20 minutes before.It Lee Eunsook.He don't want to say any word.He just walk then stop when that girl ask him.Its annoying he think.

 

"Are you really quit from the school?".Eunsook ask concernly.

 

She only can see Jonghyun right now.Because his back facing her right now.

 

"Whatever~".Jonghyun short reply yet it firm.

 

Eunsook looking at Jonghyun with guilty.She could feel his disappointment. But she got nothing more to say.She just watch till he nowhere to be seen.

 

Meanwhile, Jonghyun walk weakly.No strenght.Frustrated.Absurd.All in one.He want to be alone.Thats all he want.It just let him rest for awhile.He try to let go of the earphone.

 

"Why this thing keep stick here, chazemna!".Jonghyun throw away that thing to floor.

 

He lean himself on the wall.Breath in and out to relax his mind.He closed his eyes.

 

TRAINING ROOM~~

 

Jonghyun was practising his new song Sherlock together with dancer.He doing it alone since the rest of the member had other schedule.But he already told Onew about this thing.Onew quite shock from the first but accepted it when Jonghyun explain more.and yesterday scene still as a secret.He don't want his hyung to worry about him.He knows that the leader is nice person and a good friend for sure..

 

In the middle of practise, his mind suddenly remind about the yesterday scene.He smash his cap hardly on the floor.Everyone just shock.He walk out from the room.Meanwhile, his manager keep calling him but he ignore it.He is totally absurd!

 

"Yah,Jonghyun..I know you already famous, but you need to focus.Besides, you already have your solo upcoming..Just follow the rules and...".The manager word cut by Jonghyun punch the wall hardly.."I don't know what are you thinking, but I will let you rest~".The manager answer stutterly.

 

Jonghyun punch the wall so hard.His hand already bleeding.He sit on a sofa for awhile.He had no energy left.He is crying.He not even concern to watch who the one that standing in front of him.

 

"My idol~".Leetu greet Jonghyun.

 

His word stop when he saw Jonghyun hands is hurt.Its bleed.

 

"If you really want to punch, wasn't it must be Taemin~".Leetuk said.

 

"Did you see all of it?".Jonghyun ask weakly.

 

"Urmm..so you pretending not to see it?".Leetuk ask.

 

"Yes..I know that Lee Eunsook only love Taemin and it not gonna change a bit~".Jonghyun told him in a sad tone.He grin then."Im the one who likes her from the first..Everything I do to grab her attention but always fail.But thats not important.The main point here is, I always love her.I will try very hard..and not gonna give up till th end~".Jonghyun explain to Leetuk.

 

Leetuk just nod and smile.He really taken a back with Jonghyun word.Its a determination quotes."I will not give up".He really proud to hear that.Love is determine.It need to be fight.

 

"I want you to do something from now on~".Leetuk direct him.

 

"Bonde?".Jonghyun ask.

 

"Don't come to school for awhile~"Leetuk told him.

 

Jonghyun face become weird.Why? but he didn't ask.It must be another step as bait.Then he nod as the answer which is refering to agree.He will try everything that can make him stay with her in the final.Like he said.I will try my best till the end and watch it~Jonghyun told himself.

 

 

 

 

 

a/n : So, another chap.Well, a few more chapter then its complete.Im not going to ruin the mood.Till the end it still JongYu.Don't need to worry..hehe..thanks for reading.Fighting! 

 

 

 

 

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jhengchie
#1
Chapter 9: Aww.. it ended nicely! Well at least the two of them are loving each other and the handy plus (we call it bandaid here) became their bridge.

Congrats for finishing your story..

Though in the future it is okay to space your updates to 1 per day just to give your readers somw time to think about and leave cliff hangers. But i understand that you wanted to finish kt fiest so it's okay.

Looking forward to more from you and stay ppsitive about writing ^^
jhengchie
#2
Chapter 7: okay so a love triangle huh
Well they should just settle it with Eunsook fairly. ^^

Fighting on this series!
jhengchie
#3
Chapter 6: okay~ this is really going nicely. and well frankly i am curious about Taemin.. hmm

well there area lot of korean words int here that i am not familiar with lol ^^
jhengchie
#4
Chapter 4: well there's developments in there and some fluff moments..
DOnewyah
#5
Chapter 4: Omg your story is cute!!
jhengchie
#6
Chapter 3: hhahah well the plan started..

the flow is okay for a while ~

i would suggest that you put your author's note with a tag "a/n:" At the end so that it is not confused as part of the story.. good direction so far ^^
reimvp
#7
Chapter 1: i think you make a progress whilst writing this fic. you listen to the readers' advices. that's good. you have separated the dialogue too, so the reader know who says what.
keep up the good work, authornim. i'm sure you'll do better by the time ^^
jhengchie
#8
Chapter 1: First why is the fic marked complete ? Maybe you ticked the box unintentionally? Hahah you should remove it if you are going to add more chapters.

About sugfestions, it'll be nice if you separate dualogues from the rest of the paragraph and well it's nort necessary to highlight it.

I understand if engliah isn't your first language but i am sure you will improve with time.. i am liking the main idea so far ^^
panda-kawaii #9
Hope you update soon^^ can't wait to read
jhengchie
#10
interesting ^^ I'm going to look out for this~