The Truth

F.T. Island Dorm Life

"Jaejin-ah.."

"Ne?"

"Have you forgiven me? For what I have done?"

"Ne. Why not?"

"Anida.. It's just.. Nevermind." Wonbin ended and pulled Jaejin in for a hug. After all, who knows? This might be their last hug yet..

 

-At the dorm-

Hongki and Jonghun are in their room while Seunghyun and Minhwan were in their's


-Seunghyun and Minhwan's room-

"So... that guy was Wonbin hyung?"

"Ne.."

"He looks a little pale.."

"Whatcha mean?"

"I mean, I think he's sick hyung.. Not those minor sickness. Big ones."

"Minari, you sure?"

'Ne. My step-uncle looks just as white."

"And you step-uncle...?"

"Has Cancer."

"Mwo?! You saying Wonbin hyung have cancer?"

"Molla.. I'm just observing.."

"Aigoo Minari.. Maybe that's why he left! He didn't want us to worry!! Uhh.. Minari-ah.. Can you tell roughly which cancer and what stage Wonbin hyung is in?"

"Um.. I think it's Stage 3 Stomach cancer.."

"Ahh. Gumawo Minari-ah. Quick, let's go tell Hongki hyung ang Jonghun hyung right away!" And they both dashed towards the other room.

*knock* *knock* *knock*

"Come in~~"

"Hongki hyung! Jonghun hyung! Bad news!!"

"What's wrong Seunghyun-ah? What bad news?"

"Uh, wait hyung, where's Jonghun hyung?"

"Toilet."

"We'll wait for him.."

"Wait for what?" A voice said. Jonghun.

"Ahh! Hyung! Ppalli! Sit down!"

"Waeyo Seunghyun-ah?"

"Minari discovered something big and important!! Regarding Wonbin hyung!!"

"He cheated on Jaejin?! I knew it!!"

"Relax, Hongki. Let him talk will you?" And Jjonghun signalled for Seunghyun to continue.

"According to Minari, Wonbin has Stage 3 Stomach cancer!"

"MWO?!" Both Hongki and Jonghun shouted, as if on cue.

"Ne, ne! Ask Minari! He has a step-uncle who has Stomach cancer!! He said they were equally pale!"

"Aigoo, Seunghyun-ah.. Stomach cancer can't be betermined with pale skin,ne?" Jonghun said.

"Ask Minari!" Seunghyun retorted and pointed to the innocent child, who was fiddling with his thumbs.

"Actually.. My mother has the special sight.. that she can tell someone's illness and she told me I've got her genes,, so I can tell when someone's sick or not..." Minhwan said as his voice went softer and softer.

"Wait, so Wonbin has Stomach cancer? Sure?" Hongki asked. Minhwan nodded his head. The 4 of them looked at each other. And starting thinking of how to break the news to Jaejin and find out Wonbin's reasons.

 

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Wahahaha~~~~~ So now, Wonbin has stomach cancer? NUU!! TT^TT Sorry Wonbin!! DD: -prays-

anw, another cliffhanger for you all to enjoy~~~ :333

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choijonghyunsaranghe #1
Chapter 16: I cried T_T
DKimLittleGoddess #2
Uhhh... I don't get it. -.-; You're what seems to be 'plot' and the whole story is completely different. There's a lot to point out but I'm gonna comment what I remembered.

You're writing style is kinda... off. There was a lot of unnecessary smileys everywhere and too much use of 'kekekeke'. If your characters are happy, you can always express it in other ways like, 'He chuckled, "Blah Blah Blah." Then smiled.' instead of using that laugh too often.

And the story was too fast paced. The days were continuous and a lot happened like they did this and that and immediately saw Wonbin, etc. Wonbin's last five minutes was wayyy too fast. You didn't even wrote what happened during the analysis and just injected him with a 'killing medicine' whtver that's called. ~.~;

And as I've said, the plot and the whole story is different. It ended with Wonbin dying? I thought I'm reading about F.T Island's Dorm Life focused on SeungHwan. I was expecting that they do things like this and that with Minhwan but then it shifted and focused on Jaejin and Wonbin's story. -.-; And whatever happened to SeungHwan after they discovered they were childhood friends? -.-;

And how can Minhwan magically knew that Wonbin is sick? O.O; He inherited this from his mother... Okay. But he immediately knew it was stomach cancer? Whoa... *O* But this is a 'fic' anyways, so it's acceptable in a way.

Sorry if I sounded harsh. I'm not being mean or anything... ^^v You can improve, definitely! :)

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YourRemedy #3
Waeyo!? Why did you kill wonbin? Why? T-T<br />
anyways, I love it!<br />
paranoidfreaker #4
Oh my~~ Wonbin you're sick?????<br />
TT^TT
paranoidfreaker #5
new reader here!! wah~~ i think i love your story.. just update soon.. and i hope wonbin don't do anything that will hurt jaejin..<br />
^^
asdfghjBullySong #6
cliffhanger .. i hope wonbin will not do anything to our jaejin :))
SHINee2MinLove #7
@kihyunkit; haha! :D ne, thank you very very much!! :D
asdfghjBullySong #8
eheheh i love your pairings and the story :D so cool :D update soon :D
SHINee2MinLove #9
@kihyunkit; haha((: ne, i will update asap. :D gumawo for reading!!!^^<br />
@FT123456; hehe, thanks for reading too. ;}
FT123456 #10
Aww.. Jinnie gonna be sad ><
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