Love Pain

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Description

This a story of an orphan boy Key who falls in love with blood vampire Jonghyun who is disguised as human.

Foreword

English is not my first language. This is a TV serial. My mom, my bestfriend and my younger bro is crazy about this serial. So here it is. Hope u like it. Please do comment and subscribe.

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Engravedintomyskin #1
Chapter 13: jonghyun ur so rude
Engravedintomyskin #2
Chapter 12: wow jonghyun made a big impression
czuczi12 #3
Amazing! <3
ochibi93 #4
Keep up with the good work.
JongKey4evermore
#5
Chapter 10: Stupid Krystal, stupid roommates and stupid police :(
I can't help wondering why Jonghyun saved Key... What was Jonghyun doing of stupid things this time? What does his tatoo look like? Will the girl just let it go? And why is Jonghyun so harsh? Ah.... There's so much I want to know!!!
blingblingcutelocky #6
Chapter 10: i hate krystal like in the story in real life she is great. But Key? Drugs? What?!?!??!?PLs update soon i cant stand the sliff hangers.
JongKey4evermore
#7
Chapter 9: Stupid Krystal :( I don't like her... She's so mean to Key, making him cry and all...! Poor Key!

So... He is in a big creepy forest now? Jonghyun is going to appear again in the next chapter or the chapter after that, right? But how would he appear... :) he might just appear when Key is lost and is really scared of everything... Or something scary happens to Key like someone chasing him or a group of some creatures surrounding him with scary/creepy looks on their faces... And then Jonghyun comes to his rescue? Maybe Key by accident find Jonghyun's house in the middle of the forest?
No matter how, they will surely meet in the dark forest, right? I honestly think I'm going to be really disappointed if they don't... (^.^)

Anyway... Keep up the mysterious and rather exciting fic :) I'll be waiting for you're next update!
JongKey4evermore
#8
Chapter 6: Wow, mysterious. I wonder what the tatoo looks like and what it means though, there must be a meaning behind it.
The others didn't see him? is it because they were far away? Is Key the only one he shows himself to right now? Why wont he speak to Key? Aish so many unanswered questions. please update soon, I really want to find out more!
jjongluvbummie
#9
Chapter 1: a good first chp.keep it up