Still Alive!

Love Pain
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The stranger put Key down. "Excuse me. Can you listen to me. Excuse me." key calls out for him but the stranger with tatto on his back walks away and disappear in to the forest.

Minho and Taemin reach the bottom. "Key!" Minho call for key. Taemin spotted Key and tapped Minho shoulder and said. " Minho, Key!" and they ran to Key. "you're alive!? YOU'RE ALIVE! Key you're alive! I got carried away. I got a little to emotional. But he's not dead! He's alive!" Taemin said and hugs Key, and hi five with Minho. "Key, what are you looking for?" Taemin asked confusingly. "Taemin, where is the man who saved me?" Key asked. "Who?" Minho asked in cofusion. "I think he hit head that's why he's like this." Taemin said to Minho. " I think he's scared. Let's go up." Minho said. "Com'on Key let's go." Taemin said to Key. But Key keeps staring at the place, where the strangers disapperd. Taemin signal Minho to carry Key. "I'll carry you okay. Let's go." Minho carry Key in brideal style. "Minho, put me down." "Wait for me." Taemin said and run after them.

(NEXT MORNING AT CAFE)

"Feeling better?" Taemin asked Key. "Umm... Yeah." Key answered. "There you go guys." Minho said and put the coffe on the table. "I'm sorry Key. But, you know what. It was all your fault. I mean, I know I should have checked the ropes properly. But, you know Key, your eyes, your one glance made me lose all my senses. So I was right, it was all your fault and also you're very special." Minho said f

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Engravedintomyskin #1
Chapter 13: jonghyun ur so rude
Engravedintomyskin #2
Chapter 12: wow jonghyun made a big impression
czuczi12 #3
Amazing! <3
ochibi93 #4
Keep up with the good work.
JongKey4evermore
#5
Chapter 10: Stupid Krystal, stupid roommates and stupid police :(
I can't help wondering why Jonghyun saved Key... What was Jonghyun doing of stupid things this time? What does his tatoo look like? Will the girl just let it go? And why is Jonghyun so harsh? Ah.... There's so much I want to know!!!
blingblingcutelocky #6
Chapter 10: i hate krystal like in the story in real life she is great. But Key? Drugs? What?!?!??!?PLs update soon i cant stand the sliff hangers.
JongKey4evermore
#7
Chapter 9: Stupid Krystal :( I don't like her... She's so mean to Key, making him cry and all...! Poor Key!

So... He is in a big creepy forest now? Jonghyun is going to appear again in the next chapter or the chapter after that, right? But how would he appear... :) he might just appear when Key is lost and is really scared of everything... Or something scary happens to Key like someone chasing him or a group of some creatures surrounding him with scary/creepy looks on their faces... And then Jonghyun comes to his rescue? Maybe Key by accident find Jonghyun's house in the middle of the forest?
No matter how, they will surely meet in the dark forest, right? I honestly think I'm going to be really disappointed if they don't... (^.^)

Anyway... Keep up the mysterious and rather exciting fic :) I'll be waiting for you're next update!
JongKey4evermore
#8
Chapter 6: Wow, mysterious. I wonder what the tatoo looks like and what it means though, there must be a meaning behind it.
The others didn't see him? is it because they were far away? Is Key the only one he shows himself to right now? Why wont he speak to Key? Aish so many unanswered questions. please update soon, I really want to find out more!
jjongluvbummie
#9
Chapter 1: a good first chp.keep it up