Just For The Night

Description

Joonmyeon gets locked out of the group's dorm and is forced to find somehwere else to stay until the others return home. Not enough money to rent a room, he picks the first alternative that comes to mind.

Foreword

Inspired by a chat-spawned GIF with Onew and Suho getting all affectionate on stage.

 

I blame these people for my downfall.

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Amalya #1
Chapter 3: bahaha Entertaining as always. They have a rather adorable relationship that could easily cross into something more. I love the easy camaraderie they share and their back and forth banter is quite enjoyable. They appear very comfortable with each other with just that little bit of hope and/or disappointment when one or the other doesn't particularly communicate. The ninja comments were cute, especially since Jinki is notoriously clumsy. heh

But I loved the attention you threw to the rest of the members as well. Especially that mention of Jonghyun. Poor baby. I can honestly imagine him having next to no voice at the end of a day and the way you described it was probably rather true, all things considered. Toothy grin and all that. ;) I'm sure the nuances will pay off in the end but in the meantime, they're a fun little tidbit to get into. I love getting to know the characters beforehand! XD
gtop7en #2
Chapter 2: Just don't go getting laid and keeping it a secret.
Amalya #3
Chapter 2: Great job in pointing out the valid concerns of the members; not just worry (as genuine as that is). Crazy fans are no joke. :/ And it's okay, Suho! You can admit it to be left out every now and then, however intentional or otherwise. >.>

Concerned members are fun to read though. Especially Chanyeol's comment at the end. bahaha Oh dear... :) And maybe easy reads are the way to go. They're still a fun ride either way and I'm curious to see how things continue to develop!
samyeol #4
Chapter 2: This sounds interesting :)) OTL i can't imagine taemin being a hahahaha
Amalya #5
Chapter 1: Bahaha That was entertaining. Watching Shinee's maknae be a bit of a isn't something I've been privy to much and it was interesting. Poor Suho. Shame on his managers/members for not letting him know what's going on until the last minute (or in the case after it was already too late). And how could you tease us like that with the snippet of imagery from Jinki just out of the shower? >.> Buh.

*grumble grumble* Very much looking forward to seeing how this progresses though. After the pic you told me about, I can definitely see Joonmyeon and Jinki sort of hitting it off. It'll be interesting to see how they interact in this. ^_^ Looking forward to the next update! Huzzah!
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