Chapter 26

☪ Enchanted | A 2010 Girl Group
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MAY 3rd, 2011

 

 

 

 

 

 

"If we're caught, our heads are going to be served to Yeseul on a silver platter," Ana nervously bit her lip as she hesitantly followed her members down the dark yet bustling sidewalk of Seoul.

"They're never going to find out, Allison was knocked out when we left," Sara waved off the younger girls worries, practically strutting down the street.

"We have three hours before Allison is up and checking our beds," Ellie reminded the three girls, setting an alarm on her watch.

"This is the craziest thing we ever did," Kyojin's eyes were wide, her two hands balled into light fists against her chest.

"And it's going to be the most awesomest thing we ever did!" the rapper squealed.

"Is that even a word?" Kyojin whispered to Ana who just shook her head.

"Come on, it's just two blocks away!" Sara gleefully squealed, grabbing Ellie's hand (to grabbed Kyojin's hand who then grabbed Ana's hand) to pull the group faster through the busy street.

"What if someone notices who we are?" Ana carefully asked when they reached the long line waiting to get into the brightly colored building blasting music.

"We can run," Sara shrugged, not focusing on that possibility, instead more siked to be able to step foot in a club.

"Just say that you get that often and laugh," Ellie spoke, secretly terrified that this night would end horribly.

Within the next thirty minutes the members entered the loud, dark club with excitement (and a tinge of fear). Sara immediately dragged the members onto the dance floor between rapidly moving bodies, the sour scent of booze and sweat meeting their noses as they tried to let go of themselves.

"Stop caring so much!" Sara's loud voice was barely audible over the blasting music. "No one here cares, just let go girls!"

It took a few minutes before the members weren't so stiff in their movements and were genuinely able to enjoy themselves. They momentarily forgot about their hectic lives, being idols, having anti's, the stress of their soon-to-be comeback and what everyone around them expects from them. For now they were simply young adults out to have a good time with each other.

After an hour of dancing Kyojin excused herself from the trio to grab herself some water at the bar before she collapsed. Even at her impressive height with heels she found herself having a difficult time making her way through the tight crowd. At one point she had to literally shove people out of the way because either no one could hear her 'excuse me' or simply ignored her.

Once the Greek girl finally made her way to the bar she had to

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If anyone's interested in applying for another girl group, I just released 판닷위 :: Girl Group PhantasY! Feel free to apply! ☪Enchanted

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minwoo_key_fan1
#1
Chapter 57: Wow...2 years of this story? Doesn't feel like it~
Although it wasn't the desired ending I liked it! <3
My favourite parts would probably be when the girls sneaked out to the club and the whole Khione and L interaction and the learning about Korea variety show that they had!
I loved how you didn't just automatically make them super popular since debut and gave them a huge luxury dorm from the start like most apply fics. No, you gave them hardships and scandals which were realistic and I loved it!
If the story were longer, I would have loved to see all Enchanted's interaction with fans and their love interests.
I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR FUTURE APPLYFICS!
minwoo_key_fan1
#2
Chapter 47: I respect and agree with your decision~
I'm also looking forward to apply for your new upcoming apply fic too!
My writing skills have gotten wayyyyy better than when I applied for Enchanted, so I'm excited to make a new character for you!
I will patiently wait till August 27th!
minwoo_key_fan1
#3
Chapter 46: Wow, this must have been hard for you. I honestly also feel conflicted since I actually grew attached to Enchanted, but at the same time I've also been getting the vibe that you don't know what to do. It's understandable that most of you motivation has been lost, so I'm not angry don't worry :D
But, I've always felt this way about everything: If you lost motivation, or you truly don't feel anything then either put it aside, or work on something even better!
I'm not telling you to just quit this, but I'm saying if you feel that you have better and bigger ideas for something else- go through with it!
Maybe you can put this aside and work on it when you do get inspired- or maybe even include the Enchanted girls in some of your other apply fics? I don't know.
But if you keep writing with having one foot in and one foot out, it's a loose loose situation for the readers and you.
Maybe I'll apply for your other apply fics too! Because I would love to.
-melis
#4
Chapter 45: The girls seem *sooo* much happier now. I'm so glad :D And I'm so curious about their comeback! You always pick the best songs, so I'm sure this one'll be just as awesome!

I love Kyojin's "you would fail" to Ana in the photography room too omg

And hopefully after seeing this everyone won't think IM is so bad anymore! I mean from the building (which I still love omg) to the closeness of the artists and staff, I think it'd be pretty hard to deny that IM is a great company.
minwoo_key_fan1
#5
Chapter 45: Aww the girls were so cute when they were showing off the building~
Psh- the trainees should've waved at the camera! C'MON DUDED YA'LL ARE GONNA BE IDOLS ONE DAY lol
Still looking forward for their comeback song <3 Seriously, I'm really curious!
And I hope that after seeing the amazing building people will feel that IM isn't bad cuz it's obvious that they have a lot of money and stuff! PLUS I MEAN they call their boss unnie so hopefully people take that in and think that the place is awesome!
minwoo_key_fan1
#6
Chapter 44: Sorry that I didn't comment on the last chapter e.e I'm on vacation and the wi-fi plus there's some really bad family drama going on with health issues and stuff so yeah...BUT I'M HERE RIGHT NOW~
SO YAY A COMABACK SOON! Cannot wait ^.^ and I'm also excited for their new comeback reality show thing even though it's only three episodes lol
Now, sheesh people think that the girls are nothing now because they're not officially in SM anymore T.T But I know that my babies will prove them wrong! ENCHANTED FTW!
-melis
#7
Chapter 42: I've been forgetting to read omg

First off, I'm so glad their newest single is Loving U! It's definitely one of my favorite all time favorite Sistar songs.

Also, I don't know how to explain it but I think I'm in love with the IM building??? It's soooo cool and modern and.... Just wow. And the company is so chill, like. It must be so weird (but awesome) going from a place like SM to *actually* being able to relax.

And SIHYUN!! I was so worried when they switched over to IM though like.... How could the story be the same without him? Sihyun is love. Sihyun is life.
minwoo_key_fan1
#8
Chapter 42: Personally i think that IM is wayyyy better than SM! I mean wow! The contract is amazing and they get freedom! How amazing is that??? It's probably the best company ever! So sweet <3
I guess I understand why they feel like trash, but I honestly believe that this is best for them! AND YAY SIHYUN IS BACK!!! I missed him~
I'm looking forward for the comeback! Wonder what it is this time.....
minwoo_key_fan1
#9
Chapter 41: WOAH- the new dorm is amazing! Great upgrade for the girls *thumbs up*
AND IS ALLISON'S ULZZANG KIM SEUKHYE? CUZ I LOVE HER! If it isn't then damn she looks like her!
Now where the hell is Sihyun? The dude needs to come back!
Speaking of comeback's, I wonder when Enchanted will have theirs....although they do deserve a break.
jadefix
#10
i like how youre still writing this