Chapter 16

☪ Enchanted | A 2010 Girl Group
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Note: It's difficult for me to get into a story when I already have left it for a period of time, so this chapter is important snippets just so I can get the juices flowing and approach a point in the story that I'm really excited for. Plus, this story is going to go over a handful of years so I thought it would be expected for at least one year to be a bit rushed.

JUNE 23rd, 2010

 

 

 

 

 

 

"This is what you felt like when you were recording yesterday?" Ana clenched her eyes as her hair got pulled and prodded at.

"Still kind of feel like it," Sara scoffed, an irritated look on her face as the makeup artist gave her the final touches, purposely deeply inhaling through her nose.

"If I sneeze on the camera, will we get more added to our contracts?" Ana dryly joked.

"I don't even want to think about that," Ellie frowned, uncomfortably pulling at the tight pleather shorts encasing her thighs.

Once their makeup was finished the girls went over the directions one last time with the director, Kyojin and Sara were more-or-less the stars of the commercial. Sara looked ready to murder when she realized how much running she was going to have to do today while Kyojin looked paler than normal.

In order for the members to not look too sweaty in the last scene with all four of them, that was the first scene they recorded. Ana held a tissue to her nose as everyone was going over last minute details, standing on the inside of a van. Once they were given the signal Ana removed the tissue and picked up the double guns they gave her. Ellie leaned against the van with a black baton. Sara stood to the side with a black baton in her hand. Kyojin kneeled opposite of Sara, a gun in her hands.

Once the director deemed they got the perfect shot, the running began. In order for the girls (mostly Sara) to not be huffing and puffing in front of the camera, they did the running face shots first, taking a very short break in between for them to catch their breath. It's not that the girls are out of shape, it's just that the director wants them constantly sprinting, which even the average runner would find difficult.

When they finally got a break, Sara with her arms laying across her head as she tried to get as much air as possible back into her body, they were disinterested by the meal that met them.

"I'm really getting sick and tired of eating the same thing everyday," frowned Ana. The members reluctantly picked up their plates of tasteless, steamed chicken and asparagus.

"I did the math," Ellie randomly stated, poking at a long asparagus head. "We're only eating around 700 calories a day."

"This shouldn't be legal," Kyojin mumbled, only the members heard her and they nodded their heads, agreeing instantly.

 

 

 Sara | Oksana

JUNE 28th, 2010

 

 

 

 

 


"I'm getting really sick and tired of this bull," Sara bluntly stated, the sickness almost fully out of her system.

Ana gave the rapper a wide-eyed look, darting her eyes towards a lone Strong Heart staff member lingering in the hallway. Sara gave her a small smile that came off a bit condescending, making the staff member sc

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minwoo_key_fan1
#1
Chapter 57: Wow...2 years of this story? Doesn't feel like it~
Although it wasn't the desired ending I liked it! <3
My favourite parts would probably be when the girls sneaked out to the club and the whole Khione and L interaction and the learning about Korea variety show that they had!
I loved how you didn't just automatically make them super popular since debut and gave them a huge luxury dorm from the start like most apply fics. No, you gave them hardships and scandals which were realistic and I loved it!
If the story were longer, I would have loved to see all Enchanted's interaction with fans and their love interests.
I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR FUTURE APPLYFICS!
minwoo_key_fan1
#2
Chapter 47: I respect and agree with your decision~
I'm also looking forward to apply for your new upcoming apply fic too!
My writing skills have gotten wayyyyy better than when I applied for Enchanted, so I'm excited to make a new character for you!
I will patiently wait till August 27th!
minwoo_key_fan1
#3
Chapter 46: Wow, this must have been hard for you. I honestly also feel conflicted since I actually grew attached to Enchanted, but at the same time I've also been getting the vibe that you don't know what to do. It's understandable that most of you motivation has been lost, so I'm not angry don't worry :D
But, I've always felt this way about everything: If you lost motivation, or you truly don't feel anything then either put it aside, or work on something even better!
I'm not telling you to just quit this, but I'm saying if you feel that you have better and bigger ideas for something else- go through with it!
Maybe you can put this aside and work on it when you do get inspired- or maybe even include the Enchanted girls in some of your other apply fics? I don't know.
But if you keep writing with having one foot in and one foot out, it's a loose loose situation for the readers and you.
Maybe I'll apply for your other apply fics too! Because I would love to.
-melis
#4
Chapter 45: The girls seem *sooo* much happier now. I'm so glad :D And I'm so curious about their comeback! You always pick the best songs, so I'm sure this one'll be just as awesome!

I love Kyojin's "you would fail" to Ana in the photography room too omg

And hopefully after seeing this everyone won't think IM is so bad anymore! I mean from the building (which I still love omg) to the closeness of the artists and staff, I think it'd be pretty hard to deny that IM is a great company.
minwoo_key_fan1
#5
Chapter 45: Aww the girls were so cute when they were showing off the building~
Psh- the trainees should've waved at the camera! C'MON DUDED YA'LL ARE GONNA BE IDOLS ONE DAY lol
Still looking forward for their comeback song <3 Seriously, I'm really curious!
And I hope that after seeing the amazing building people will feel that IM isn't bad cuz it's obvious that they have a lot of money and stuff! PLUS I MEAN they call their boss unnie so hopefully people take that in and think that the place is awesome!
minwoo_key_fan1
#6
Chapter 44: Sorry that I didn't comment on the last chapter e.e I'm on vacation and the wi-fi plus there's some really bad family drama going on with health issues and stuff so yeah...BUT I'M HERE RIGHT NOW~
SO YAY A COMABACK SOON! Cannot wait ^.^ and I'm also excited for their new comeback reality show thing even though it's only three episodes lol
Now, sheesh people think that the girls are nothing now because they're not officially in SM anymore T.T But I know that my babies will prove them wrong! ENCHANTED FTW!
-melis
#7
Chapter 42: I've been forgetting to read omg

First off, I'm so glad their newest single is Loving U! It's definitely one of my favorite all time favorite Sistar songs.

Also, I don't know how to explain it but I think I'm in love with the IM building??? It's soooo cool and modern and.... Just wow. And the company is so chill, like. It must be so weird (but awesome) going from a place like SM to *actually* being able to relax.

And SIHYUN!! I was so worried when they switched over to IM though like.... How could the story be the same without him? Sihyun is love. Sihyun is life.
minwoo_key_fan1
#8
Chapter 42: Personally i think that IM is wayyyy better than SM! I mean wow! The contract is amazing and they get freedom! How amazing is that??? It's probably the best company ever! So sweet <3
I guess I understand why they feel like trash, but I honestly believe that this is best for them! AND YAY SIHYUN IS BACK!!! I missed him~
I'm looking forward for the comeback! Wonder what it is this time.....
minwoo_key_fan1
#9
Chapter 41: WOAH- the new dorm is amazing! Great upgrade for the girls *thumbs up*
AND IS ALLISON'S ULZZANG KIM SEUKHYE? CUZ I LOVE HER! If it isn't then damn she looks like her!
Now where the hell is Sihyun? The dude needs to come back!
Speaking of comeback's, I wonder when Enchanted will have theirs....although they do deserve a break.
jadefix
#10
i like how youre still writing this