Chapter 12

☪ Enchanted | A 2010 Girl Group
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JANUARY 16th, 2010

 

 

 

 

 

The heavy rain falling from the sky turned into slick ice the second it hit the ground. It was too cold and dangerous to walk anywhere. If you were smart you wouldn't even get behind the wheel of a car. It was truly a horrid day.

In one of the many practice rooms in the SM building the Enchanted members were taking a short break.

"So you guys broke up again?" Ellie asked, primping herself in the large mirror. Looking through it she watched Sara's reflection as it huddled over a small phone, the look on her face enough for her to know the rapper was less than happy.

"He broke up with me! What the hell?!"

"What was his reason this time?"

"He said I was being too clingy!" she huffed. "Me? Too clingy? I'm like the perfect girlfriend what the hell does he mean by this?!"

"Did he explain himself?" Ana drawled, not bothering to look up from her numerous Astronomy books surronding her.

"He said I should understand," the rapper growled, tempted to throw her phone against the wall in her aggravation. Instead, she ripped the couple charm from it's antenna, successfully throwing it across the other side of the room.

"You know you're just going to have to waste money to buy another one," Ellie chided.

Sara scoffed, crossing her arms. "I'm totally not getting back together with him."

"That's what you said last time," Ana chuckled.

"I'm serious this time though."

Just then the door slammed open to reveal an unnaturally pale Kyojin. The maknae held her stomach with a shaking hand, her hair falling limp in front of her downcast face.

"You're still not 5feeling good?" the leader swiftly crossed the studio to stand next to the girl.

Kyojin could only shake her head, not trusting herself to open and not spill her guts everywhere. Ellie wrapped an arm around the slightly taller girl, leading her to the sole couch in the studio. Ana stood up to help the leader with the sick girl.

"So weird how only she got food poisioning," Ana mumbled in thought.

Ellie shrugged. "We don't know for sure if that's what it is. After all, none of us got sick and we all ate the same things." She turned to the maknae and asked, "Will you be alright for the show tonight? Can you perform?"

Kyojin didn't move. Only her heavy breathing an indication to her consciousness.

"Guess that's your answer," Sara sighed, leaning her head against the wall she sat along. "Do we tell Sihyun?"

"Tell Sihyun what?" their manager asked as he walked into the studio. His eyes zeroed in on Kyojin, confusion flashed through his eyes and within seconds he was kneeling in front of her. "What's wrong?"

"We think food poisoning," Ellie answered for the maknae.

The managers eyebrows furrowed in confusion. "But the rest of you are fine?"

"It might just be her system," Sara replied. "We are from different countries, she could have tried an ingredient for the first time the other day and it didn't agree with her."

Ellie and Ana gave the rapper a look of disbelief. "Sara I think that's th

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minwoo_key_fan1
#1
Chapter 57: Wow...2 years of this story? Doesn't feel like it~
Although it wasn't the desired ending I liked it! <3
My favourite parts would probably be when the girls sneaked out to the club and the whole Khione and L interaction and the learning about Korea variety show that they had!
I loved how you didn't just automatically make them super popular since debut and gave them a huge luxury dorm from the start like most apply fics. No, you gave them hardships and scandals which were realistic and I loved it!
If the story were longer, I would have loved to see all Enchanted's interaction with fans and their love interests.
I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR FUTURE APPLYFICS!
minwoo_key_fan1
#2
Chapter 47: I respect and agree with your decision~
I'm also looking forward to apply for your new upcoming apply fic too!
My writing skills have gotten wayyyyy better than when I applied for Enchanted, so I'm excited to make a new character for you!
I will patiently wait till August 27th!
minwoo_key_fan1
#3
Chapter 46: Wow, this must have been hard for you. I honestly also feel conflicted since I actually grew attached to Enchanted, but at the same time I've also been getting the vibe that you don't know what to do. It's understandable that most of you motivation has been lost, so I'm not angry don't worry :D
But, I've always felt this way about everything: If you lost motivation, or you truly don't feel anything then either put it aside, or work on something even better!
I'm not telling you to just quit this, but I'm saying if you feel that you have better and bigger ideas for something else- go through with it!
Maybe you can put this aside and work on it when you do get inspired- or maybe even include the Enchanted girls in some of your other apply fics? I don't know.
But if you keep writing with having one foot in and one foot out, it's a loose loose situation for the readers and you.
Maybe I'll apply for your other apply fics too! Because I would love to.
-melis
#4
Chapter 45: The girls seem *sooo* much happier now. I'm so glad :D And I'm so curious about their comeback! You always pick the best songs, so I'm sure this one'll be just as awesome!

I love Kyojin's "you would fail" to Ana in the photography room too omg

And hopefully after seeing this everyone won't think IM is so bad anymore! I mean from the building (which I still love omg) to the closeness of the artists and staff, I think it'd be pretty hard to deny that IM is a great company.
minwoo_key_fan1
#5
Chapter 45: Aww the girls were so cute when they were showing off the building~
Psh- the trainees should've waved at the camera! C'MON DUDED YA'LL ARE GONNA BE IDOLS ONE DAY lol
Still looking forward for their comeback song <3 Seriously, I'm really curious!
And I hope that after seeing the amazing building people will feel that IM isn't bad cuz it's obvious that they have a lot of money and stuff! PLUS I MEAN they call their boss unnie so hopefully people take that in and think that the place is awesome!
minwoo_key_fan1
#6
Chapter 44: Sorry that I didn't comment on the last chapter e.e I'm on vacation and the wi-fi plus there's some really bad family drama going on with health issues and stuff so yeah...BUT I'M HERE RIGHT NOW~
SO YAY A COMABACK SOON! Cannot wait ^.^ and I'm also excited for their new comeback reality show thing even though it's only three episodes lol
Now, sheesh people think that the girls are nothing now because they're not officially in SM anymore T.T But I know that my babies will prove them wrong! ENCHANTED FTW!
-melis
#7
Chapter 42: I've been forgetting to read omg

First off, I'm so glad their newest single is Loving U! It's definitely one of my favorite all time favorite Sistar songs.

Also, I don't know how to explain it but I think I'm in love with the IM building??? It's soooo cool and modern and.... Just wow. And the company is so chill, like. It must be so weird (but awesome) going from a place like SM to *actually* being able to relax.

And SIHYUN!! I was so worried when they switched over to IM though like.... How could the story be the same without him? Sihyun is love. Sihyun is life.
minwoo_key_fan1
#8
Chapter 42: Personally i think that IM is wayyyy better than SM! I mean wow! The contract is amazing and they get freedom! How amazing is that??? It's probably the best company ever! So sweet <3
I guess I understand why they feel like trash, but I honestly believe that this is best for them! AND YAY SIHYUN IS BACK!!! I missed him~
I'm looking forward for the comeback! Wonder what it is this time.....
minwoo_key_fan1
#9
Chapter 41: WOAH- the new dorm is amazing! Great upgrade for the girls *thumbs up*
AND IS ALLISON'S ULZZANG KIM SEUKHYE? CUZ I LOVE HER! If it isn't then damn she looks like her!
Now where the hell is Sihyun? The dude needs to come back!
Speaking of comeback's, I wonder when Enchanted will have theirs....although they do deserve a break.
jadefix
#10
i like how youre still writing this