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Soul Mates?

- 11 years before- 

5 year old Suzy was out in the backyard playing with her sister, Jessica, and cousin, Krystal, both 2 years older than Suzy, when her mother and aunt called for them to come inside.

Confused, the three girls went into the house and into the living room sitting on the couch and waiting to find out why their mothers had called them.

Not too long after, Krystal's mother walks in holding 3 jewelry boxes with a name written on the box. Noticing these Boxes, curiosity found its way on the girls faces. The mothers taking note of the looks on the kids faces, they couldn't help but to chuckle at it. 

Krystal's mom gave each of them the jewelry box with their name on it while Suzy's mother spoke.

"Now girls, these necklaces right here are very important. You cannot lose them okay?" she says

"Why umma?" Suzy asks while opening the box. 

When the girls opened their boxes it revealed a teardrop shaped necklace, with a unique shape inside.

"because this necklace will lead you to a very special person. " 

"How can that be possible?" Jessica asks

" Well honey, when you grow up and you are ready to find that one person if you get close to that person the necklace will start to glow and become warm. But when your far away the necklace will be cold."

-Present day- 

Suzy recently turned 18. She was lying in bed thinking and then turns her attention to her night table where the jewelry box stayed.

Hearing the door open, Suzy glances up and sees her sister Jessica walking in. 

"Is something wrong Sica?" Suzy questions her

"I just want to ask you something" Sica replied.

"What is it? Suzy replies

Before Jessica could reply, the door flew open and in came Krystal running

"DID YOU ASK HER YET?!" Krystal asks

Confusion showed on Suzy's face "What?"

Jessica turns her attention to Suzy and says "Well I was about to ask before someone came in very rudeky may I add,"  giving Krystal a look before she continues on.

"But, we want you to think about maybe coming to Korea with us"

As soon as the words sunk in, I was so shocked.

"KOREA? You Want me to come with you? Why?" Suzy questions

"Well, you know you're my favorite sister and to Krystal you're her favorite cousin and we've always been close. We'd miss you if we went off to Korea for University and left you here all by yourself" Sica says.

"I'm also your only sister Sica... But really? Where will we stay if I come?" Suzy asks worryingly.

"Either way you get what I'm trying to say miss smarty pants!" Jessica says

"Anyways, We can find an apartment for all of us! Auntie's okay with it too!" Krystal adds

"Sooo? How about it lil sis? We'll still be together" Jessica says.

Suzy smiles. " I guess I can't refuse an offer like this"

"YAY!" Both Krystal and Jessica exclaims

 

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woot! First chapter done! What to you guys think? I am so sorry about my grammar and stuff >//< I shall edit it later :D But enjoy! ^^

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--daedreamer #1
Chapter 24: y o u ' r e a l i v e


wowow congrats

haha but no really take care of yourself okay?? you probably have loads going on, and i know how the stress feels. everyone probably does tbh, so don't worry. you yourself should always come first so make sure you have time for yourself and don't let yourself be overwhelmed by stress and all okay? bottom line is that you are alive, and your subbies will be patient, so worry about what matters most ♡
--daedreamer #2
Chapter 21: haha they spilled ittt lol and krystal's impression of yongguk was funny lmao any impression of yongguk is the best (Y)
oh? i thought you were the school's vice prez not a team?
--daedreamer #3
Chapter 20: Awe glad you finally got the chance to update! I noticed that your writing improved a bit in this chapter! Whoooot! *applause* :)
awee suzy with b.a.p is soo cute! I'm really curious to see their relationships developing! Haha I'm liking the characters so far :)
--daedreamer #4
Chapter 19: LOL i always wonder if people read a/ns too but i know that i do for suureee xD
hmmm it's honestly up to you whether or not you want to make the chapter longer. honestly, everyone usually writes their chapters at a different length. for example, i usually make mine around two thousand words. i'd say the minimum chapter length should be around say five hundred, but it's up to you in the end =)
i really like the chapter though! i feel like jessica's and krystal's stories are starting to develop ;)
--daedreamer #5
Chapter 19: LOL i would've helped but it's already monday soo....yeah o u o
your ideas sound great though! good luck for the project ;)
TripleT
#6
Chapter 17: Awwww.... Feel better! Don't worry! We'll be more patient with the upcoming chapters! Hwaiting! P.S. Ice cream always makes me feel better! ^^
mikotan2000 #7
Chapter 15: I prefer all becos there will be no broken hearts and each of them will be happy
candicesilvan #8
Chapter 15: KYAHHHHHHH this is so good
--daedreamer #9
Chapter 15: wait, so by maknae line you mean zelo jongup and youngjae, and by hyung line you mean daehyun himchan and yongguk? so she'll end up with all three from the category?
itstraac #10
Chapter 14: >~> BAP are my soul mates ^~^