Chance

Raven's Gate
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◆Kris POV◆

"Didn't I say to follow me always?!" I scolded Chen and he hung his head low.

"I'm sorry..." he muttered.

"I may sound overprotective but you're my little brother and the last time I saw you was when you were 1. Do you understand why I'm like this now."

"But everyone thinks I'm your lover! Why aren't you telling them who I actually am?!" he screamed.

What, no. I am mighty Krisus.

"Well tell them they're ed up." I simply replied and pulled him into the car.

♛♕♛

"Jongdae-ah, you're ba-" Chen's mom shouted from inside and stopped midway.

"Mom, this is-"

"Why is he here."

"Well he wanted to meet you-"

"Get out Kris."

"Mom..." I started.

"Get out!" she screamed and started slapping against my chest.

"You look like your bastard dad, so get the hell out!"

Oh my god.

So naturally I hugged her as tightly as possible and after that came all the cheesy "I hate you"s and "You dad was an ".

But later that night I was able to enjoy her lovely dumplings so I guess everything's going well.

Sort of.

Lol.

Shut up I hate describing cutesy, sappy or cheesy stuff.

I love Ilamas though.

._.

♛♕♛

"Ge, help me!" Panda faced boy screamed.

His hand couldn't hold onto the edge any longer and he let his fingers slip off the edge.

"Tao!" someone with puffy cheeks shouted in horror as he looked over the edge, he himself trying not to fall off.

"What are you doing? Go save him!" Chen slapped my face.

And so I flew down towards him, trying my best to keep up.

Then everything around me stopped moving. The toppling buildings froze in mid-air and everyone stopped running abo
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HanJihoon
#1
Chapter 33: It's a lity for not continuing the chapter. But why sehun is dead, out of the blue. Confusing me
luludeer7_abcdEXO88m
#2
Chapter 33: this is good authornim and it's just sad that you didn't continue it ;-;
BUT
THE HUNHAN ENDING GHAD I CRIED HARD DAMN
IT HURTS DHEWUHEUWH ;-;
bemyshine
#3
Chapter 33: After a looonnnngggg time.... huhuhu.... Itz okay author-nim, i understand... (cuz i'm also taking A Levels.. xD) Thank you so much 4 the update!!! Dammit... Why must u kill SeHun~ Poor Lu~~ TT__TT
Cvang13 #4
Chapter 16: Wait... Kai could have just teleported while mid-air.. O - O LOLOL
HelluvaButlr
#5
Chapter 29: wow, really love this story ^-^ the title really grabbed my attention
love every moment, but looking forward to the hunhan moments and loving chen and kris moments too
bemyshine
#6
Chapter 28: of course someone read this.... LOL XD ...
bemyshine
#7
Chapter 27: YAY!!! You update... *bows90°* will be waiting 4 the next chapter..

HWAITING!!!! XD
xXmysteriousXx
#8
Oh my god, you're writing a Hunhan based on 'The Power Of Five'!? T_T I love you so much!! >.< did you read the last book yet? I haven't u.u
mottamot
#9
please update TT_TT