Don't forget our love

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Wooyoung doesn't remember. Nichkhun does.

 

This story goes back and forth from past to present time. Wooyoung's pov is in the past while Nichkhun's is in present time (unless stated otherwise).

Warning: Story is a little 'trippy'. I hope no one gets too confused reading it.

 

I'm having difficulty writing my first story so I practiced writing randomly to get my creative juices flowing. I ended up with this; a finished story :l

Inspired by one of my favorite movies of all times. Not exactly the same but it's loosely based on the concept.

Not confident at all about posting this because I feel the concept I'm going for is a little too ambitious for my writing skills. Nevertheless, I finished it and I want to show it off to someone. Besides, if I never post, I'll never improve, right?

(I haven't given up on 'Finding Mandu' yet. I just feel better if I write complete stories and then post them. I think I'll do that from now on.)

Foreword

 

He thinks he should just let it go. Wooyoung is tired, and it's completely normal to forget things when you're tired. Especially menial, unimportant things like Nichkhun's shirt, their inside jokes, their plans for the future. No big deal.
 


Except Wooyoung looks lost whenever he leans in for a kiss. Looks weird out whenever Nichkhun tries to entice him to bed with suggestive words. Looked horrified when Nichkhun showed up late last night in his room in nothing but his birthday suit, sporting a woody.



Yes, he looks happier and healthier than he's ever been, but how can anyone not be concerned when his lover is acting like they've never been together at all?
 

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QueenOfRoses #1
Chapter 9: SUCH a gorgeous story.
dreamstar #2
Chapter 9: oh wow, i really love how this plays out. it was unpredictable and my emotions went everywhere but everything ends up just perfectly. i first thought khun gonna get all his memory out the first time, and i was quite glad when he stops and pulls the plug on the procedure. i didnt know then that it was going to turn him into a jealous monster, and to be honest i was quite sad when he went back and got his memories removed, but in the end everything is well and they are starting again afresh.

though somewhere in me i had this thought that everything might turn sour again, because they never did resolve their differences, that they dont have their past experiences to refer to and to learn from to be better for each other. in that sense a sequel on how different this time will be would be very interesting... or idk maybe they never learn anything and they will just keep repeating that whole cycle of loving and fighting and erasing memory, like its an endless circle of creating and erasing memories.

this was such a lovely read and i love how it keeps going to the past and the future. love it :)
ninewonders #3
Chapter 9: Omg, this was such a beautiful read. I found myself alternating between scratching my head and then bawling through some parts of this story.

It was such a shame that khun and woo didn't try to talk or fix their dysfunctional relationship but somehow the concept of erasing their memories and then falling in love again, this time hopefully the right way was much more beautiful than what I had imagined.

Ahhhh!! Thank you for this amazing and interesting story. I hope you'll write more in the future! :-)
khunyoung987654321 #4
Chapter 9: Wow.. such a great story. This is probably the only story that would make me feel undescibable xD the end is not really satisfying for me, because they both won't remember their past together..
But i'm happy that they get a chance again. I still think their decisions in doing all of this was sooooooo wrong. This could have been solved much easier... and better.
Especially it annoys me so much , that they NEVER talked to each other, after something had happend. Makes me a bit angry xD

In the end i still don't like chansung xD he was so extremely weird the whole story. I really thought chansung wanted woo just for himself, because from the beginning on he acted so strange..
Thank god it ended xD i think my head would have exploded ^^'''

Great story :D
khunyoung987654321 #5
Chapter 8: No i really don't know what to feel anymore..
This is so sad... and at the same time it seems like he'sdoing the right thing.
I dom't know what to feel anymore.. i'm afraid of reading the last chapter...
khunyoung987654321 #6
Chapter 7: O.M.G
This confused the hell out of me. Your brain is quite creative xD my respects ;)
And thank god!!!!!! Khun changed his mind in the very last secound :D

You don't know how happy i am right now xD
khunyoung987654321 #7
Chapter 6: Felt so extremely embarassed reading this chapter xDD i'm used to (damn that was chaotic, when i read the very first time XD) , but this was so funny and embarassing, because the two doctors were still there xD
I don't wan to imagine what they saw or heard, while khun was remembering XD
khunyoung987654321 #8
Chapter 5: So everything was just a misunderstanding :// ?
That was so stupid of khun not to talk to woo about it ><

The have mouths for good reason, why don't they use them than ò.ó ?????
khunyoung987654321 #9
Chapter 4: So....
Khunnie cheated on woo?? Okay this is suprising. I thought woo just went crazy, but seems like there's really a reason to this, although i don't really understand his reaction....
He could have just talked to him ://

I'm still not ok with chansung.. why does he kmow so much?? I'm sure that channie told woo about the doctor, but why did it have to be this way??
Chansung is weird..
khunyoung987654321 #10
Chapter 3: Omg..
Now i really want to punch that face of khun and the freak/doctor.
Khun would make the worst decision by locking his memories of him and woo...
But i'm grateful that the doctor said, he doesnt erase memories, but just lock them...
I really hope khun won't do it ...

I don't know why, but i really dislike chansung in your story o.o he's not really likeable and i have the feeling he's hiding this all for his own goods. Could it be that he wants woo for himself?

Well.. let's find it out in the next chapter :D
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