Dream-shots

Description

A series of one-shots that are inspired by my dreams.

Since my dreams are often ridiculous and illogical, the one-shots here are not the exact same version. I don't know if others feel that way but there are times when you wake up from a dream and realise that your dream has a very amazing plot that it's impossible for you to think of when you are awake. So i've decided to pen down certain scenes of my dreams which i love! 

 

P.S I'll mostly be using Krisber as the main pairing.

Foreword

Chapters:

1) When dreams come true
3) When fire burns the heart
5) When being drunk is better 

Author's Thoughts
Hequella
Sorry for the confusion! i kinda like writing explanations. i shall do this for every chapter~
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Seoulqueenka #1
Chapter 5: DAEBAK AUTHOR!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!
becauseimstupid #2
Chapter 6: I like this, please continue the story :)
loneheart #3
Chapter 6: I might be a black sheep here. But I can't really stand how you write. It's choppy and for the first two chapters (not including the explanations) I honestly had almost no idea what was going on. Even if these may be drabbles about your dreams, there should be more flow in how each event progresses.
I also have many crazy and interesting dreams that I write down in a dream journal. But for the most part, it's okay for a dream journal to have things jump around, not so much for a story/oneshot.
I suggest if you want to take a dream and turn it in to a short story/oneshot/drabble, you might need to add in things that never happened in your dreams to keep the flow of the story smooth.
And personally I like having some kind of closure or confirmation of something at the end of a oneshot/drabble. To me the first chapter didn't have that closure until I read the explanation :/

I hope this will help you with writing more chapters later on ^^
krisber_1806 #4
Chapter 6: Update gain...
--yeseuri #5
Chapter 6: It's great! Leaving us to think about it ourselves again, I see; haha :)
I really enjoy reading your oneshots♥
krisber_1806 #6
Chapter 5: Jelous.
I think amber jelous.
llamajellyfish #7
Chapter 5: So Kris.......asdfghjkanbghjuqkwt you must make a sequel for this!
--yeseuri #8
Chapter 5: I'm sorry, but can you please write a sequel to this? C:
I know that really goes against the whole point of this collection of dream-shots but...Itthink you're really onto something pretty awesome here. C:
I would like to see you elaborate more on this plot, because I think there's more to the characters than they actually show. C:
--yeseuri #9
Chapter 4: OHH I SEE :P
I would've guessed they were "together" already by the way they acted in the story but I guess not; heehee
Anyway, you can kinda guess that they had feelings for each other when Kris says "Find me" and Amber obediently bows. :)
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