The Baby Sister (Teaser 3)

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"Can you have the cars ready in time?"

Four members of City Streets sat in an office, all holding a bottle in their hand. The office was a bit messy with papers covering the entirety of the desk and sticking out haphazardly of the file cabinet. The room was rather stuffy with no real signs of any air condition - unless you count the one window behind the desk that was open. The room was filled with whirring, buzzing, and screeching of different tools from the adjacent garage. Amongst the four members was the leader, the face of the team, the main mechanic, and the oldest member of the gang. Three of the four were covered in a layer of dirt, grime, grease, and sweat while the last one was as clean as a whistle. The one who had voiced the question was none other than the leader himself - Jay Park.

Two of the boys - both of whom were covered in dirt - shared a glance, before one of them turned to face the leader, "Yeah. I might have to pull in a few extra hands, but we'll have them ready in time for the race."

Jay nodded his head, took a sip of his drink, and turned to look at the fourth man, "TaeHyun, keep in contact with Junsu. I want to know if anything changes."

"Sure thing, but," the twin with blue eyes started with a sly smile on his face and an eyebrow raised in amusement, "You know he doesn't tell anyone - not even me - anything before race day."

Jay made a noise in the back of his throat that told TaeHyun that he had heard and didn't like that fact about Junsu. The twin merely laughed at the leader's annoyed expression as he took a drink of his soda. Both the face and the mechanic sat in silence as they enjoyed the small break from work. Though they loved working on cars, breaks were always appreciated.

Suddenly, there was a knock on the door. All heads turned towards the noise as the person didn't even wait for Jay to acknowledge them. They pushed the door open and stood in the doorway for only a moment before walking inside the office and closing the door behind them. The figure turned out to be a girl with tan skin and blue eyes. Her red and blonde tipped hair was pulled in fishtail braid that was tossed over her one shoulder. Her black, ankle-high boots clacked on the floor slightly as she walked past three of the boys. She stopped momentarily when she was next to the face of the team - Joon. The rather short woman ruffled his hair, causing him to laugh before she came to stand behind the chair Jay sat in.

She leaned down and wrapped her arms around his shoulders, "Hey oppa. Whatcha guys talking about?"

The leader patted her clasped hands, "Hey Jojo. And nothing much, just getting ready for the race in a few days time."

The girl, Jojo - or more commonly known as Natalie - made a 'hmm' noise as she snatched Jay's drink and took a swig. One look at her brother's face nearly sent her into a fit of laughter. His jaw was slacked and he narrowed his eyes at her. How dare she steal his drink. Jay tried to take his drink back, but only to have Natalie back away from him. She was not going to start this... Or maybe she was. Jay began to move so he could stand up and, with a mischievous twinkle in her blue eyes, Natalie dashed around his desk and behind Joon's chair.

"Save me!"

Both TaeHyun and Taeyang, the main mechanic, were laughing at this point. They always enjoyed when the baby girl of the group came around; she made things so interesting.

Joon's brown eyed grew wide and he looked between the siblings as he held his hands up, "Don't get me involved!"

The red and blonde haired woman scoffed at her friend and punched him the shoulder, "You coward."

While Natalie glared at the face of the team, she forgot all about her brother. Who, by the way, was sneaking around to stand behind her. Before she could realize this, Jay wrapped his large arms around her middle and hoisted her into the air. Natalie screamed in surprise and nearly elbowed Jay in the face out of natural instinct. Luckily, as her brother, he knew what she would do and was able to tilt his head out of her range. Once she got over her intial shock though, the woman started laughing. With one arm still holding onto her waist tightly, Jay reached around her and grabbed his soda from her hand.

"I win," he stated simply with a smug smirk on his face.

Her brother put her down after that and she crossed her arms over chest, "No fair... You're bigger and stronger than me."

"Oh don't give me that."

Natalie merely laughed at his comment as she went to sit on the arm rest of Joon's chair, seeing as how there wasn't another chair in her brother's office. Jay rolled his eyes at his sister as he finally resumed his place in his seat in front of the other three. The three who simply watched the comical and common display between the Park siblings. As her brother became a bit more comfortable in his chair, an arm wrapped around Natalie's waist. Her blue eyes turned down to Joon, before she leaned against one of her best friends.

"Now, as we were saying," Jay started, glaring pointedly at his sister, "The race is this Friday night. Everyone needs to make sure his or her car is working properly. Anything that doesn't feel right needs to be checked. Remember, all of the gangs are going to be there. This is going to be a huge event. Which means, there's a lot of chances for things to go wrong," he threw a glance towards Natalie once more.

Normally, Jay wouldn't stress such simple precautions, but he knew his sister. He knew how she acted at the races and how she drove. He never wanted her to get hurt - well, in truth, he didn't want anyone in City Streets to get hurt, but she was his sister. Obviously, he was going to be a bit more protective of her than the other boys.

The tan girl simply smiled at her brother, "We'll be fine Jay. Don't worry."

"I'll always worry. It's my job," he replied quickly with his own smile.

The other three boys shared a look - here they go being all sweet and caring. TaeHyun dropped his jaw and brought his dinger up to his tongue as he imitated gagging at the overload of sweetness. Though, he couldn't poke too much fun; he tended to act similarly around Bekah. Nevertheless, he gained a chuckle or two from Joon and Taeyang. As Jay continued giving his little talk over what was going to happen, TaeHyun pulled out a pack of cigarettes from his pocket. He pulled out one and placed it between his lips before searching his pockets for his lighter.

By chance, Natalie looked over right before he was going to light up, "Could you please not light up in here, TaeHyun oppa?"

The blue eyed twin gave her look asking her if she was seriously telling him not to, as he was older than her, before he glanced towards Jay. The leader merely sighed and shook his head - it would just be easier if TaeHyun didn't.

"Fine," the twin drawled out as he stuck the cigarette behind his left ear and pocketed his lighter.

"Thank you," Natalie stated with a bright smile upon her face.

"Yeah, yeah, yeah," the boy sighed as he opted to just take another swig from his soda.

"Oh, Jojo," Jay called out, gaining his sister's attention, "Don't you have some homework you need to have done by tomorrow?"

Natalie's face contorted into a grimace as she groaned, "Aww Jay, don't remind me."

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Alrighty, there ya go, another teaser. Congratulations to --Angelmato-- ! Please let me know if I'm portraying Natalie right/to your liking. I hope I got her nature with her brother and some little tid bits about her across. Also, to stick to my random car facts: what kind of car do you think would be the most expensive? A Rolls Royce? A Ferrari? Lamborghini? Viper? Well, you would be wrong. The most expensive car that was ever sold was the 1931 Bugatti Royalle Kellner Coupe. It was eventuall sold in 1987 for... $8,700,000! Let's put this in perspective - an Aston Martin One-77 is only $1,850,000 and a Ferrari Enzo is only $670,000... Just wow.

Well, I hope you enjoyed this teaser as well as the others. So, just to make sure everyone saw, there is a deadline now. It's March 4th, 2013. I hope to see more applicants and maybe on for the Crew... Please? P.S. Anything purple is a link ^.^

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moonie #1
Chapter 12: Ah, you're back! And if it means anything, I think this chapter is far from craptastic - your writing is really good and compelling! Hopefully writing for this story will come easier for you :3 And although I can't speak for the other applicants, I can say that Skye didn't seem awkward/OOC at all :)
ddred88
#2
Omg hi! Lmao i am so glad to see an update, I actually think alot of us took like a break from the website. But im glad ur back!! With a rrly good chapter too. It was honestly refreshing to see girls not getting along that easily since ppl usually write a group of girls with different personalities getting along. I hopr you update soon and more people review.
moonie #3
yay you're back ^^ I totally understand your dilemma-there are A LOT of characters
I wanna see the poster-I'm sure it'll help all of us XD
I'll be waiting for your next update (take your time-I'm sure it'll be worth the wait)
spontaneity
#4
Chapter 11: i was gunna hold back on commenting since i didnt wanna make it seem like im spamming you LOOL
but the last comment was made like more than a yr ago sooo

i'm excited to see the chara chart haha
just curious tho, you still plan on including all those you've chosen?
cause what if the users not active anymore?
just wondering haha

goood luck btw!
spontaneity
#5
Chapter 10: teaser 5: LMAFOLMFAOLMFAOLMFAO OMFG KYUHYUN AND MILAN <33333

LOLOLOLOLOL HEECHUL AND BEKAH

HOON AND THUNDER

HOON AND BEKAH

MILAN'S SCREAM AT THE END LOLOLOL LMFAOLMFAOLMFAO wow i really like this chatper!!! LMFAOLMFAO i wanna see more of kyuhyun and milan's pranking wars :DDDD

LOLOL hoon and oreos huh. i don't blame it. they are heavenly. and heechul as in sj heechul? o.O is bekah the oldest in the crew?
i've caught up with everything yes!! :D my procrastination was getting to me LOLOLOL

and to a/n: you can do whatever the heck you want LOLOLOL im not knowledgeable cars at all so i really don't mind what you do to it :D
spontaneity
#6
Chapter 11: teaser 6: i'll be abck for a comment on teaser 5 real soon LOLOL. just that i wanted to let you know that i've known you accepted my character into the story and am really really really grateful for it!! thank you so much!!!! and congratz to primrose0930 too!!! :D


i honestly love all the interactions. they're so funny and awesome to read and basically everything the characters say was amusing too. you're a great writer!! loved the teaser so don't worry about i ^.^ im just excited for the final teaser and then the story starts!!! im guessing the story would start with the race? or like the race is in the last teaser and it'll be something like everything is gunna change after that race and then there would be the chapter 1. i honestly dont even know if you understand what im trying to say, but if you don't LOLOL its okay. just don't mind the babbling.
spontaneity
#7
Chapter 9: teaser 4: congratz moonie, hanuel!!!
LMFAOLMFALMFAO P.O <3333 its nice to read about how easily someone can brighten up her day. awww poor haneul likking top whose with bom. topbom shipper right?

maybe p.o would be a better love interest ;) LOLOL so why was P.O all of a sudden blushing? i thought maybe it was the fact that bora was also there but it doesn't seem like it.. dammnnn bora. so hardworking!! o.o i admire her.
yay two teasers down, another two to go!! glad im finally reading again because the updates make me happy. the way you write makes it so entertaining to read ^.^


just read the a/n but i guess you have your answer already LMFAO.
spontaneity
#8
Chapter 8: lmfaolmfaolmfao omfg im in love with jay and natalie's relationship. their sibling interactions were so adorable and i'd be off to the side laughing my off alongside taehyun and taeyang if i were to witness it.

its also so cute to read how caring of a brother jay is. though they were bickering moments, he turns serious just thinking about his sister racing.

congratz to --Angelmato--!!
yay! im finally here to update! sorry it took so long author :x eventually, i'll be back to comment on the next two chapters too. sorry for the wait.
Soonyangel
#9
Chapter 11: Congrats to the chosen members of City Streets !
This teaser was really great ! I really like how you portrayed their zombie-like personality in the morning. I pity poor Taehyun who can't even light up a cigarette haha~ The relationships between the members of City Streets are really cute, they're all close and Jay feels likes a father for all of them :3
I really can't wait for the next teaser to be out and the story to begin ! I've missed this story :) The race Ivy's talking about in the car will be awesome, I'm sure :3
However, there is just one little thing bothering me : the French line ~ It's not "bonlieurs", it's "bonheurs" ^^ That's the only detail bothering me, since I'm French ^^
Anyway, good luck for your finals and udpate soon !
--Angelmato--
#10
Chapter 11: ...damn that's a long comment