Living the same life as Everyone Else

Description

Imagine living in an isolated part of the world where you are not allowed to choose what you would like to wear or what you want to be when grow up. Do you think it's cruel when you are always told what to do? 

Do you think it's cruel when you are killed when you are not needed anymore? Do you think it hurts to be the same as every other people? There is a town, where you don't have a choice.. You have to do the same things everyday. You are what the King's people tell you. You wear the same clothes as the other people.. You only have a name, nothing else.. I lived like this for a long time.. But then, something changed..

Foreword

AN: Ok, ok, I know that the title sounds really stupid but seriously. I tried EVERY word and everything and only even weirder titles came out T.T Also welcome to my dark fic :3 Two of my dark fanfics are ending in a week or so and I just had this idea.. Umm, this isn't based on anything that happened in the world. Actually, I wanted to abandon the idea, but then we were learning something in Lit. that was related to the idea I got after talking with someone and thinking everything through.. (for someone who knows Hungarian Literature, the idea was mainly inspired by one of the scenes in Madách's Ember tragédiája ('The tragedy of the human' or something in English).

 

So yeah, I hope that you'll find this Ok :D The first x chapters will be umm.. dark but I don't know about the others yet..

WARNING: This story will contain violence and possible /abuse. The chapters that contain them will be marked as 'M'. (plus seriously, the idea itself is.. dark..xD)


Characters:

Kim Kibum

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A boy who was born in the Isolated World. He is seventeen years old and a Worker. His only dream is to get out of that place. He is the mother figure of Taemin, another boy that is living in the same place as him. Lives in a 'apartment' with many other workers. He hates being the same as others.

 

Kim Jonghyun

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Aged nineteen, he was born in the Outside World. He doesn't know how he came to the Isolated World, but he wants to escape. He is a Student, who will once become very successful. He lives in a huge house with other Students. Once he is sent out to observe Workers, someone very special catches his eye.

 

Lee Taemin

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A worker that lives in the same apartment as Kibum. He is only fifteen, but very good at doing his job. He wants to escape but he is afraid of the outer world.

Choi Minho

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An Observer that was sent by the King. Deep down, he wants to escape because he can't bear this life. 

Onew

 

Onew

Used to be Kibum's best friend, but he was broken by a Leader. No one knows his real name. Deep down, he wants to escape as well.


I woke up at five a.m., the usual. I could hear the voices of the other Workers in our room. There were ten of us in the tiny space where I could barely lie on the floor, since it only contained the beds and a few wardrobes. I hated that room, but I had no other place to go.

I dressed up, not bothered by the fact that the eyes of my roommates were on my body.. I was already used to it.. I wished I wasn't. As I walked into the 'dining room' I was met by a lot of other people looking the same as me. All of us had red eyes, bruises on our whole body, bags under our eyes and grey clothes. A T-shirt and a pair of sweatpants.. I have heard about a world where I could choose what I wanted to wear. Where my back wasn't full of whip-marks, because apparently I wasn't working hard enough.. I wondered.. 'Does a world like that even exist..?' 

 

Katakatica
Okay, sorry about the last strange messages, my cat woudln't leave me alone and it was hard to type like that xDD

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Umisarmg #1
Chapter 8: I really like this story so far, so please do not give up on it ^^! I just have a small critic (please don't take me wrong. It is constructive :3 and if you don't agree with it it will be allright, I will still love this story though.) I've had the oportunity— and pleasure— of reading more than just one of your stories —you've made me cry— and even though I did only read one that was already completed I realized that you usually go for the main characters to fall in love real quickly (it is not bad! I love the romance and fluff .3.) to make it short —'cause I'm gessing you might be anoyed already.... Sorry D: — I think that if you give them more time to fall in love and, play a little bit more with the plot mainwhile, your story will get an even stronger and more interesting/ realistic feeling than it already is and have.

Again, Please don't take me wrong I really love this story and other of your stories as well, if you don't want to take what I said and even you consider it ofensive I will understand —and if it is the case apologize—.
Whit that said I just want to tell you that I really like your stories and that you are so far one of the most creative of the authors I've ever read.
P.S: forgive my english. It is a little bad as that's not the language we speak in my country.
Thanks! And please update soon!!! (/^o^)/
Pabo-sshi #2
Chapter 8: I love this ff, please update soon!
SohAnna #3
Chapter 8: Jong is just too cute!!!! please update soon... >.<
shiashin #4
Chapter 8: I love this so much!Kibummie is blushing kyyaaa so cute!
shiashin #5
Chapter 7: awwww kibum is so kind!!and so is jonghyun!!

i love this story!! xDD Actually i love all of your stories lol
LocketyLover_Bunny
#6
Chapter 7: DAWWW i hope jongyun saw that, so sweet of kibummie
Dancing2kpop
#7
Chapter 7: aww Yoogeun!!! WAE YOOGEUN!!??