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You've Fallen For Me [Being Re-Written]

Suzy and Seung Jo couldn't take their gaze from each other.

The only thing that brought them back to earth was someone clearing their throat.

"I think we should leave, we'll come visit tomorrow"Tara said as she tugged on Hanna's and Solbi's hands.

"I'll walk you guys out" Sulli said as she followed the girls.

"I'll leave you two alone" Said Suzy's mom.

***

Seung Jo's P.O.V

"Hey" I said as I took the seat that her mother had been in.

"You got hurt" She said looking at the scratch in my arm.

"Yah! You broke your leg and you're worried about my scratch?" I .

She smiled lightly, and it made me feel warm inside.

"Why did you do it Suzy?" I asked. It was a question that I had been dying to ask.

She looked away and stared at a wall.

"I...just...couldn't let you get hurt" she answered softly.

That simple statement tugged at my heart so hard, that I felt as if all those years trying to keep my heart closed came crashing down on me.

I slowly reached out my hand to hold hers.

She flinched aat my touch, but I didn't let go of her hand, and she slowly relaxed.

"Thank you" I said, and this time, she looked at me and gave me a real smile.

One that took my breath away.

***

Hannah P.O.V

"Thanks for the ride Tara" I said as I got off the car.

"You're welcome" said Tara as she the car and drove away.

I was about to go in my house when I noticed Lee Shin leaving his house.

I hesistated to talk to him, but in the end I made up my mind.

"Hey" I said as I took two steps towards him.

Lee Shin turned to look at me with a surprised look on his face.

"Hi" he said. He was carrying his guitar case, so I assumed he was going to practice.

"I didn't thank you last time for saving me" I said. I was very greatful to him for that night.

"No problem, I'm sorry you had to be in that position"he said. His voice was usually emotionless, it reminded me of Suzy's voice, but when he said that I think I could detect a hint of...frustration?

"Are you going to practice?" I said trying to change the subject.

"Not really, I...just like to go to the park and play" He said. He seemed lost in thought when he said that.

"Do you mind if I come?"

***

Lee Shin's P.O.V

Maybe...I lost my mind?

After Hannah had asked me if she could come with me, my brain just went nuts.

I even agreed for her to go!

I don't even let my friends go with me to the park because that us my special time.

I don't even know why I told her that I was coming here.

But that's the thing with her, I felt that I just had to be honest with her. Every time I was with her I blurted out the truth.

She just has that effect on me.

"Can you sing a song for me?" she asked shyly.

And just like that, I truned to face her, grabbed my guitar and started singing...

Something like in the sky

Uh... I can't define
But certain thing in my heart, 
You know I can realize
Like fairy tale I heard
Precious thing in my heart
Tell me how you feel, what what? uh same I do

Something like a toy I got
Yeah, I can remind
My love is shining in my heart, it is so clear and mind
Like fairy tale I heard
Precious things in my heart
Tell me how you feel, what what?

I want you in my life (in the castle, in the air)
I want you kiss me everyday (I take your hand, my dear)
I want you in my life (I don't want you fly away)
I want you smiling at me everyday (You're my dreaming days)
If your love won't stay with me forever
I'll be loving you, whenever
You in my life (tell me everything's alright)
I wanna be your shining light, Forever

Holdin' my pillow tight
Oh girl, I can smile
You are the part of my place, I don't tell you a lie
You're every breath I take
You're every step I make
It's not a fake thing my love, oh let me remind you

I'm feeling it inside
The heaven in the sky
You are the part of my life, girl it's not a lie
Rolling down to my bed
Gather and through my head
It's not a fake thing my love

I want you in my life (in the castle, in the air)
I want you kiss me everyday (I take your hand, my dear)
I want you in my life (I don't want you fly away)
I want you smiling at me everyday (You're my dreaming days)
If your love won't stay with me forever
I'll be loving you, whenever
You in my life (tell me everything's alright)
I wanna be your shining light

I don't wanna make your love an illusion
I believe in you, don't tell me lies
I don't wanna make your love an illusion
Baby girl, your love is so true
I don't wanna let you go

(One, two, three, four) 
I want you in my life (in the castle, in the air)
I want you kiss me everyday (I take your hand, my dear)
I want you in my life (I don't want you fly away)
I want you smiling at me everyday (You're my dreaming days)
If your love won't stay with me forever
I'll be loving you, whenever
You in my life (Tell me everything's alright)
I wanna be your shining light... 
Its' right


I sang the song I wrote the night I met her.

 


 

 

 

 

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mehakh2001 #1
Chapter 14: I think its a good idea to rewrite the story with the real names... So that the confusions get fixed.. I really hope you will continue with the new version of the story... Fighting...
Ashuasha #2
Chapter 13: Ohhh am so interested in this story...pls update my dr author
123456dj #3
Chapter 13: The story is interesting and I'm happy you're back!
love seungjo-suzy pairing..hyunmin shipper !!
waiting for ur update...!
Please update soon..
Hawaali #4
Love the story also the pairing is great hopefully authornim updates soon. Fighting
10-faly
#5
Chapter 1: Interesting work!
mamamia115 #6
Chapter 13: I love this story and the couple that i love the most is leeshin-hannah since i'm a yongshin shipper! Fighting writer
sara-js #7
Chapter 13: I love the story because I like this kind of story so you well chosen the subject it realy fabulous also well done for the stars" leaders" that attracts the intention of readers" Meee lol" it allows them to be as part to the wonderful story where they can participate that with each chapter is grow with different emotions and I appreciate your way of wirting the technics of use more logical and lovely sentences that you have put in; the way you presented each character and gives us that touches the daily life and offers to us a beautiful feeling of pleasure to be more excited to want to read more and more as in my case ;) so I hope that you can update very sooon cause it's an amazing story and I wish if you can add more scenes between my too favorite couples "seung jo & suzy" and "lee shin & hannah" THANKS :-)
T_dolce #8
Chapter 11: great 1..love all the couples. :D
nina3132 #9
I love this fanfic,your a awesome writer. :-)
makino89
#10
Chapter 12: Loved it all. All look so compatible already. Waiting for next update.