Chapter 17: I liked the way we were able to see and feel the way Eunae thinks. In my opinion, the way you write in author's point of view is stronger in terms of writing. But throwing in a chapter once in a while where the story is told in first person would be nice too ^ ^
Chapter 16: Oooh water flames, that sounds really cool. And don't worry about not updating, just as long as you don't give up on the story ^ ^ and lol, I literally flipped when I saw that this story was updated. Well maybe not literally but you get my point, right? Anywho, awesome chapter!
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