Dreams of EXO

Description

This is a story based on dreams that I've had. Of course not everything in this story is from my dreams I had to make a lot of things up or else it wouldn't be readable ^^

And this is not a Kaisoo fanfic ^_~

Foreword

This is my first time writing a fanfic and it'll proabably be my last. Cause this was not easy and it took me some time to finish it.

I hope that you guys enjoyed it even though it might not be that good. At least I tried ^_~  (And sorry for my crappy English...)

Feel free to make a comment and share your thoughts XD  Thank you~! 

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Mystical483 #1
i liked it a lot my Honey <3 it was cute even though i'ld have definetely ran away in that situation, it's really well written, it's nice to someone who doesn't speak english as a mother language also it was a cute history (i like cheesy things) so keep it goinG my honey, you should start to write not only your dreams <3 (i want to dream thiS
kind of things T.T)
alialiyalily #2
Your story is amazing . Thanks for sharing ^^
riribl #3
Finished reading!
I think that this story is nicely written ^^ I dare to say that this story is better written than most fics I've come across on Asianfanfics so far xD I like how you describe the situation, the acts of the characters, the thought of the main character etc, so I can get quite a picture on what's happening. Like what I said it's described better than most fics I've come across on Asianfanfics so far.
The English is also pretty good, especially considering English isn't your first language, although yeah I found some errors there xD But you manage to describe the story quite well using various vocabularies and phrases here, and I think it's quite good already :)
The story though, is pretty cliche imo. But well it's based on your dream after all :P
I think if you find some better and more interesting ideas for your stories you'll manage to make really good stories ^^ This story is quite good already from the storytelling and how it's described, although yeah like what I said it's pretty cliche. Imo it's the idea and the story that you really need to improve if you want to make more stories. I do hope you'll make more stories with better ideas in the future, because you're quite good in storytelling :)
Violet238 #4
I really enjoyed your story! I loved Kyungsoo's character! And haha, Kai was the bad boy. xD

But yes, you did have some punctuation and spelling errors. ^^;; I noticed that sometimes two words would be next to each other, and some sentences didn't have periods at the end. "Glas" should be spelled, "glass". :)

But those minor errors didn't take away from the story at all! I thought the story itself was great! The fact that this story was inspired from your dreams is awesome!

Thank you for posting it. :D
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