Chapter 15: well, this was perfection. And it's also the reason i have shirked homework. But reall, it so intense and emotional and great. I only wish we could have seen a little more into zelo, like in the second chapter of this, the one that was still a one shot. otherwise, characterization was perfect and i loved it all
Chapter 14: My comment will be similar to the precious one but I never felt THAT much involved and depressed by a fic before.
I felt all the pain and regrets of each of them and the sorrowful fate of not being able to change things.
When you should have said something to make a situation better but let it slip and things get only worse and you can't help it...
Amazing story. Well written. Wow.
Chapter 15: OH. MY. GOD. I haven't felt so stressed out because of a fic in such a long while. THIS STRESSED ME OUT SO FCKN HARD. I can't describe how stressed out I was while reading this. Like goddamn. TALK. CONVERSE. WORK OUT FOR FCK'S SAKE. I was so floored with the way that BangLo made up. Then when they confessed to each other with the I love you's & just... That chapter had me in tears because it was so beautiful & I didn't even know what my heart was doing because I was so damn happy for those fools. About BangHim... I felt so fckn hopeless. Like how the fck is this going to work out. I got in a huge fight with my best friend a couple of years ago (we're closer than ever now) & while I was reading BangHim's problems & everything, it just brought all of those feelings back & oh my god, it stressed me out so fckn bad. The way that BangHim made up was so natural & was very similar to how me & my bestfriend made up so. That whole last chapter had me in ruins. I cried while reading this story, no shame. You did such a good job at creating the anguish that was going on with BangHimLo. It really put me through some intense anxiety & sadness. I felt everyone's pain at once & I just... Dear fck, this story is stressful. But that means that you did a beyond terrific job at writing it! I was so exasperated throughout the whole thing & don't even get me started on when BangHim had their fight in the living room. Oooooh. Jesuuus. That was crazy. SO MUCH ANXIETY. I also really liked how you showed DaeJae's relationship. Even though it wasn't mentioned a lot, I could still feel how close & secure everything was with them. Plus I really like how it was Jongup who noticed the tension first. & how Jongup was Zelo's "knight". I overall really liked this story. It really stressed me out, but it was a really good fic. You did an outstanding job on writing it. I'm definitely going to be reading those two related fics! Thank you for writing~
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