OUTSIDER

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Kai and Luhan were bestfriends when they were in china, but an accident made Luhan forget about their friendship.  They tried to make Luhan remember it but it was useless. So Kai decide to move to Korea with his sister Tiffany and "start a new life".

Foreword

His parents divorced when he was 10, his dad moved to Korea with his little brother, and he stayed with his mom in China, but unfortunately, his mother died in an accident, so he decide to sell the house and move to Korea and try to find his dad.


But there was a problem; He doesn't know Korean, he’ll get lost if he goes there, every thing in Korea Is new and strange to him, his friend’s tried to convince him to stay in China and learn Korean, but he don’t want to waste time.

No one wanted to let him go, he was a nice friend for them, but that doesn’t change his decision.
Finally, Amber decided to teach him, 1 year passed and he learned fast, it was time to say goodbye, every one cried.


“I’ll come back.” He promised, not knowing what was going to happen.

When he arrived to Korea, every one stayed away from him like he was kind of extraterrestrial, He wants to find somewhere to live because he doesn't know where on Earth his father is. He found a hotel but didn't get enough money for it, so he just bought a newspaper and slept in the streets.

 

That’s when he met Taemin, a tall boy that looked like girl.

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Thanks for subscribing and commenting! ^^ I'll do my best to correct those grammar mistakes :) Hope you guys like the story :p

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minzysantamaria #1
Chapter 3: Seems interesting but you might want to improve your English. Next time you write a story have someone proofread it and fix any errors, I would be willing to do so for you. Don't take offense to this please, I understand everyone goes through that when learning a new language especially English.
Japanda #2
i really like the plot, but i think an improvement in English would make the fanfic much more appealing. I was kind of confuse with the wording. I hope you strive harder to learn and improve on your english. ^^
Kumikocchi
#3
congrats! ^^
camzform
#4
Congrats!^^
sincerely-me
#5
OMG congrats!
epik_perfection #6
congrats! :33
SomedayTomorrow
#7
Congrats <3
omgjeeenny
#8
congratulations!! :D
N_Precious
#9
Chapter 13: slidgfoiadyhfol;sfn!!!!!!!!!! what the hell!!! >< not that i don't enjoy taekai friendship but you really had me going there for a minute when Kyungsoo said Kai's heart was with Taemin.. and then it ends with LuKai... TT^TT

all in all though it was interesting~! Lee and Kim~~Gotta love those two!~~^^