Chapter 6

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The clock struck eight; the door bell rang.

Kibum sighed softly as he stood in the bathroom at the mirror, taking in his appearance. With his hair brushed back, his ‘cool’ clothes on, Kibum felt like the boy he used to be. Pleased with his looks, he turned and headed towards the lightless foyer to answer the door for Tiffany, where he was left speechless at the sight of his beautiful girlfriend standing before him in a fashionably, yet modest, navy blue dress that complemented her body perfectly without showing too much skin.

“Do I look good?” Tiffany asked, smiling shyly as she twirled her hair between her fingers. With light make-up that showed off her natural beauty, Tiffany was fit to be a princess.

“Stunning; you’ll be the prettiest girl there,” Kibum replied before giving her a chaste kiss on her strawberry flavored lips. Tiffany grinned bashfully and playfully smacked his arm in mock embarrassment.

“You don’t look so bad yourself either. I haven’t seen you look this good in so long,” She told him, but a moment later she clamped her hand over and looked at him apologetically. Kibum gave her a look and averted his eyes, embarrassed and slightly hurt.

“Sorry! That’s not what I meant! It’s just that you don’t ever leave the house, so obviously you aren’t going to – “

“Forget it; it’s fine. Are you ready to go?” Kibum cut her off, not wanting to hear about how he was living like a bum on the streets. He loved Tiffany, but sometimes she just didn’t understand what his life was like or what he was going through.

Tiffany nodded and Kibum took hold of her hand as they stepped outside, closing the door behind him. It was already dark out, just past sundown, and the night sky was dazzling with millions of sparkling stars. Kibum couldn’t help but think that Tiffany looked even prettier with the moonlight shining down on her.

Tiffany led the way through the abandoned neighborhood, as it was her friend’s party in which they were headed to. As they walked through the cool, dark night, she kept sneaking glanced at her boyfriend and hiding smiles. It felt like progress was being made; first getting Kibum to go to a party and next would be the second attempt at school. If all went well, Tiffany was so sure that Kibum’s life was going to start to level out and return to a new normal. All she wanted for Kibum was for him to be happy, to enjoy life with a smile on his face each day like he’d done in the past. Obviously, things were not going to go back to the way they were, and some days were going to be difficult, bu

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PictureMeBroken
#1
Chapter 11: Okay, I seriously need more of this. Because Kibum here still has so much room to get better. Like, he's got Tiffany, and he's back in school and things could almost start looking up soon, but Kibum in On The Brink Of Insanity was so much worse off. He and Tiffany weren't together anymore, just friends, he was partying every night he could and was on so many drugs that I'm surprised he hadn't OD'd long before Heechul found him, and it really didn't seem like he could be saved at first. Which means that something happened in between this and Heechul finding him that really just took every bad thing in his life and threw it at him all at once that just literally broke him. It would have had to have been so bad to him that Tiffany didn't even think she could help him anymore, and with the way Tiffany is in this and OTBOI, that says more to me than anything else.
I know that Kibum's really close to his breaking point already, who wouldn't be with all that he's already gone through, and reading this, I just keep wondering what exactly it is that pushes him over the edge.
So, you should write more of this
Because it's awesome, like all of your fics.
And I'm really curious what pushed him over the edge to make him the Kibum I saw in OTBOI
Kjoelovesheechullie
#2
Chapter 11: If I was in Kibum position I would go ape sh*t on anyone who talked cross to me, it completely angers me to no end on how they treat him in this story! I would also do what Tiffany would do. Their relationship is so cute
Kjoelovesheechullie
#3
Chapter 10: Or a shark will eat you while you're in the pool Kiki ^.^
Shineeteentop
#4
Chapter 11: These chapters are really long :) me likey~ lol It'd be so awkward if they were caught having ....XD OOOOOH :O SUBSCRIBING RIGHT NOW!
Shineeteentop
#5
Chapter 10: the whole beginning I was screaming in my head for Tiffany to come rescue Kibum~ She's just so amazing I can't get over her! I'm so fuzzy on their whole history. I know she doesn't leave him leave him but they break up. So I wonder how that's gonna go...foreshadowing at the end has me suspicious~ ROFL XD What dinosaur movies do you watch? I'm just scared the devil or a demon is gonna come outta nowhere and kill me .___. but that's just me...
Shineeteentop
#6
Chapter 9: Ugh this is frustrating >.< They're both mad for good reasons so I can't even choose a side. The whole situation . I just don't want Kibum to hurt himself over any of this
Shineeteentop
#7
Chapter 8: I knew something was gonna happen :/ I had a feeling he wouldn't be able to last. Now why was the cop forcing him to go to school again? Cuz after you're fifteen I thought it wasn't a requirement for you to go since you can drop out. Hopefully Tiffany will find him if he doesn't leave the bathroom.
blazensaddles #8
Chapter 11: Damn ^^ Tiffany and Kibum lol I hope the people can figure out the truth :/ I'm glad Tiffany is with him ^^
chikahime #9
Chapter 11: woah, i didnt know u updated!! my life is screwed lately..
sweetness frm kibum n tiffany makes my day.. =)
jilhoonsukho
#10
Chapter 11: Whoo~ I can read it now ^^
This chapter is so cute<33 I get the feeling the beach trip won't be as fun as Tiffany hopes.