Chapter 5

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When Mr. Hwang heard the doorbell ring, the last thing he’d expected was to see his sixteen year old daughter being brought home by a policeman. Needless to say, he was quite shocked when he opened the door to see an angry looking Tiffany accompanied by Office Choi.

 “Officer, what’s going on?” Mr. Hwang asked, holding open the door so the two could enter the house. He watched as his daughter stomped in, crossing her arms, and glared at Officer Choi.

“Tiffany’s not in trouble don’t worry. This is about her little boyfriend; Kim Kibum,” Officer Choi said, smiling when he saw a fault in Mr. Hwang’s eyes. He knew right then that this was going to end just the way that he wanted, because he knew that no one would never let his daughter date a murderer.

“Tiffany?” Mr. Hwang asked his daughter sternly.

“Officer Choi was going to arrest Kibum, daddy! Just because Kibum didn’t go to school today, because he was sick. Remember this morning, I brought him over so we could go to school together and he didn’t feel well so you told him that he shouldn’t go to school,” Tiffany said, desperately looking into her father’s eyes. She knew that she was getting herself into huge trouble, but if her father played along and got Kibum out of trouble then it would all be completely worth it.

Mr. Hwang looked into his daughter’s pleading eyes and knew that there was something more going on than this. He turned to look at Officer Choi and nodded.

“It’s true, Officer. I’m sure it was just nervousness, but he looked faint. I told him to go home and try again on Monday,” Mr. Hwang confirmed. He knew what was going on with that boy, being a lawyer he was constantly having meetings with the chief of police. Everyone alway

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PictureMeBroken
#1
Chapter 11: Okay, I seriously need more of this. Because Kibum here still has so much room to get better. Like, he's got Tiffany, and he's back in school and things could almost start looking up soon, but Kibum in On The Brink Of Insanity was so much worse off. He and Tiffany weren't together anymore, just friends, he was partying every night he could and was on so many drugs that I'm surprised he hadn't OD'd long before Heechul found him, and it really didn't seem like he could be saved at first. Which means that something happened in between this and Heechul finding him that really just took every bad thing in his life and threw it at him all at once that just literally broke him. It would have had to have been so bad to him that Tiffany didn't even think she could help him anymore, and with the way Tiffany is in this and OTBOI, that says more to me than anything else.
I know that Kibum's really close to his breaking point already, who wouldn't be with all that he's already gone through, and reading this, I just keep wondering what exactly it is that pushes him over the edge.
So, you should write more of this
Because it's awesome, like all of your fics.
And I'm really curious what pushed him over the edge to make him the Kibum I saw in OTBOI
Kjoelovesheechullie
#2
Chapter 11: If I was in Kibum position I would go ape sh*t on anyone who talked cross to me, it completely angers me to no end on how they treat him in this story! I would also do what Tiffany would do. Their relationship is so cute
Kjoelovesheechullie
#3
Chapter 10: Or a shark will eat you while you're in the pool Kiki ^.^
Shineeteentop
#4
Chapter 11: These chapters are really long :) me likey~ lol It'd be so awkward if they were caught having ....XD OOOOOH :O SUBSCRIBING RIGHT NOW!
Shineeteentop
#5
Chapter 10: the whole beginning I was screaming in my head for Tiffany to come rescue Kibum~ She's just so amazing I can't get over her! I'm so fuzzy on their whole history. I know she doesn't leave him leave him but they break up. So I wonder how that's gonna go...foreshadowing at the end has me suspicious~ ROFL XD What dinosaur movies do you watch? I'm just scared the devil or a demon is gonna come outta nowhere and kill me .___. but that's just me...
Shineeteentop
#6
Chapter 9: Ugh this is frustrating >.< They're both mad for good reasons so I can't even choose a side. The whole situation . I just don't want Kibum to hurt himself over any of this
Shineeteentop
#7
Chapter 8: I knew something was gonna happen :/ I had a feeling he wouldn't be able to last. Now why was the cop forcing him to go to school again? Cuz after you're fifteen I thought it wasn't a requirement for you to go since you can drop out. Hopefully Tiffany will find him if he doesn't leave the bathroom.
blazensaddles #8
Chapter 11: Damn ^^ Tiffany and Kibum lol I hope the people can figure out the truth :/ I'm glad Tiffany is with him ^^
chikahime #9
Chapter 11: woah, i didnt know u updated!! my life is screwed lately..
sweetness frm kibum n tiffany makes my day.. =)
jilhoonsukho
#10
Chapter 11: Whoo~ I can read it now ^^
This chapter is so cute<33 I get the feeling the beach trip won't be as fun as Tiffany hopes.