Capture a Stare [one-shot]

Description

Those innocent eyes seems telling me he needs something—or someone.

A Fast paced story about a guy falling in love with just a stare on her.

 


 

Foreword

This is my first time writing a one shot and fanfic story so I know it's a bit corny. lol XD It's a fanfic actually, and I used Luhan from EXO-M. This needs more improvement, a lot of grammatical errors, especially on the title I don't know how to make it XD So I'm open to suggestions, criticisms, violent reactions, etc, etc. XD

-chocoaisucream

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b2stshocksme #1
YOU HAVE. TO MAKE. A SEQUEL.
It's so cute I don't think I can take it ;A;
marina1432 #2
Awww that was SUPER cute
Sequel plz !!!
MushrooMakane18 #3
So cute ^^
ShadowYin #4
aww this was a sweet oneshot!
xyxyxy #5
Nice! Sequel or not, this is a beautiful work!
alwaysmile9 #6
aww! can you please do part 2 or whatever as long as this story is continue ^_^ it's lovely <3
windstormx #7
Awww. That was cute. But sad. Please make a sequel
patbingsoo #8
This is pretty. I'd love to know if they'll meet again.
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