Brothers

Forever

It all started when the members made a pact.

 

Flashback-Heechul POV

"What do you mean your leaving!"

"I'm leaving Super Junior," Hankyung softly replied.

"For how long-" I shouted.

"Forever," he anwered in whisper.

I clutched my chest.  Tears started to form in my eyes.

"We need to have an emergency meeting," I said.

"What?!" he said as I pulled to the living room.

Eleven pairs of eyes stared at us as we walked in.

"We need to make a pact," I demanded.

"What is going on?" Leeteuk asked.

"We need to make a promise to each other!" I screamed. "A promise to stick together, to stay forever as brothers no matter what happens."

"Why are you acting like this?" Kangin questioned. "What happened?"

"Hankyung wants to leave," I answered.

Chaos broke loose.

"What?"

"Why?"

"When?"

Hankyung looked down at his shoes.  "It's my health, please just let me go."

Everyone became silent.

"Don't worry, we will let you go," I said. "Just promise us that we will always stay as brothers."

Hankyung looked at me with sad eyes. "You mean Hanchul is over?"

I couldn't look at him in the eyes.  I could feel his stare.  I didn't know what to say.

"Fine." Hankyung said coldly. "I agree."

There was a moment of silence.

"I agree," Shindong timidly said.

"Me too," Kibum annonced.

One by one, they joined the pact.  I gave a sigh of relief.  Now everyone would stay together as brothers.  I just wanted us to stay as a happy family, even if it meant losing Hankyung.  I gave him a final hug.

"Now I know that you are with me forever," I whispered.

My words must have softened him because he hugged me back.  I started to tear up.  I began to pull away, since I didn't want to make his shirt wet with my tears. 

"I love you."

Hankyung paused.  He took so long to reply that I thought he wouldn't answer.

"I love you too hyung" he said in a cracking voice.

I looked at his face.  It was full of tears.  All the members started sobbing and started hugging each other. 

End of Flashback

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Ever since that happened, all the members carefully watched over each other.  Their brotherhood was strong.  Who would have thought of the first two to break off?

 

 

Yay!  I finished the first chapter!  Please comment and give me advice on my writing. 

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Liza_Blessedx2 #1
Chapter 17: Precious, all of it!!! but love the Hanchul Chapter <3
Ucant-stop-lovingme
#2
Omooooooo !! It already ended !?"tears of sadness and happiness " !! The chapter was great .,! Minwook were great and their Christmas was great as wll !! Lol

"Santa " I think that was eunhae
"today is the lord's day" siwon of course
"it's Christmas " it sounds cute so I think it's minwook

The last chapter was great and full of happiness !! I like it

And I LOOOOOOOOVED UR STORY AND LOOOOOVE U !! :D

why did it end soo fast ?? T.T

(ooh and thnx 4 mintioning me even though I didn't subscribe and comment since he first beggening !! But I'm stil ur number one fan )
Saranghae ~ <33333333333333
PenguinProductions05
#3
YAY SUJU CHRISTMAS but it ended, oh well it was very good whole it lasted
yuki_chicken
#4
this was so cute i loved it so much
JewelHyuk_FishyHae #5
Awwww.. The Ending is so beautiful!!! ^_^ They are Super Junior 15!!! :D :D
This is a Nice, Great, Sweet, Cute, Awesome, Beautiful STORY!!! :D I'm going to miss this... ^^
Illiora #6
The ending is soooo sweet!^^ Thank you for this story) and special thanks for MinWook *___*
Ucant-stop-lovingme
#7
Omo !! Such a great story !! Forever !! The title is great and I'm sure they'll be together forever 4 real !! Plz update sooooooon it's sooo exiting !! <3333333333

I'm ur biggest fan ! !!!!

Saranghae~ <333333333333
ohmykrease
#8
I kinda cried in the hanchul chap...new reader!!
Illiora #9
HanChul are together!^^
Could you please write a little bit of MinWook in next chapter?^^