Split up.

Hee-Soon's hell house. [ Re-writing, read Chapter 8! ]

 

Zelo POV

“La la la~” My loud whistling and singing filled up the long corridor, bouncing off the dirty, stone walls as I skipped around. I heard Yongguk chuckle slightly as he turned around and faced me, a large smirk fixated on his face.

“Listen, I know you’re cute and all- but you seriously need to stop being so happy; it’s starting to freak me out”

I raised my eyebrow mockingly and ran to his side, nudging his arm and wriggling my hips like a worm. “But why hyung? Don’t be so tense, it’s only a game remember” I smiled as Yongguk started walking faster.

“Awww c’mon hyungggggg” I wined as I tried to catch up to him.

As I caught up to him he silenced my words by pressing his index finger against my lips ‘shhh’ he mouthed as his dark brown eyes scanned the room. “What-what is it?” I whispered, my body as still as a scared elementary child. “I-I think I heard Yoona” He whispered back, taking a step to the side and pressing his ear against the grimy stone walls.

A few minutes passed and his cheek was still firmly pressed against the wall, making expressions every few seconds; my curiosity took over as I hurried over beside him and asked him of his findings.

“It is Yoona, and Minzy I think… they are arguing” he informed me as I too pressed my ear against the wall, hoping to hear some of the action. “B-but what are they arguing abo-“ My sentence was cut to halt as what seemed like millions of rocks came flying past Yongguk and I; sending small pieces of stone and rubble through our hair and along our bodies. “WHAT…..THE…..HELL?!” I managed to hear Yongguk yell as I felt a stabbing pain in my lower knee; I looked around trying to find the source of the noise but was only welcomed by a dark mess of stone, rubber and filth blocking my view from my injured best friend.

“HYUNG!” I yelled out to him.

No reply.

“HYUNG!!” I repeated even louder.

Still no reply.

“HYUNG ARE YOU ING THERE!?!” I gave it one last shot, screaming my lungs out in the process.

Still no ing reply.

This obviously wasn’t going to work- so I decided to change my tactics and get up and look for him, he was probably too injured to speak or maybe he had been knocked out- So he couldn’t be dead right….. right?

NO ZELO! I thought to myself as I mentally banged my head against a wall. Yongguk couldn’t die, he was just too macho for something like that to happen, anyways- after that incident 2 years ago he promised he would protect me, and never leave me alone.

Once I had finished clearing my head the pain in my knee had somewhat toned down a little bit and allowed me to stand, with this I immeadiantly got up and started moving a few rocks and pebbles- hoping to clear myself a path, and maybe spot yongguk along the way.

After a few drops and muscle cramps I managed to spot something in the distance- a light.

It was very distant, but not too distant to not be able to make out what it was; the main question was; where did it lead? And should I take it?

I had to admit, I was just too keen to find something so I decided to trust my luck with the mysterious light. I climbed over a few rocks and boulders, tripping and falling a few times, but before long I found myself a metre away from it.

I grinned and wiped the sweat off my forehead as I slowly walked over to it. It was a hole- in the wall; Im guessing that it was here before and everyone was too lazy to fix it, or that the rocks and boulders also had took a toll on it. I put my palms on the corners, peeping my head out into the nature that was opposite me; it was dark, but not a pleasant or romantic dark- but an eerie, horror-movie kind of dark, the kind I despised most.

No Zelo! My conscience fought with my mind, begging me to go. You have to search for Yongguk! He could be out there looking for you!

“B-but the dogs…” I spoke aloud, allowing any passer-bys to hear my thoughts. No, I have to go find Yongguk!

Soon my conscience won and I found myself swinging my leg over into the hole and pulling my tall body out. I immeadiantly got struck by one of the coldest, icy winter breeze I had ever felt- even back at home; I shivered as I tried to mentally concoct a plan.

Okay, so I have to find Yongguk. Where do I start?

My eyes scanned the forest that was surrounding me as I soon came to a decision and turned right.

Arasso, time to go find hyung!

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procrastinatingfool #1
Chapter 7: HOLY HELL this is one scary fic you got. i got goosebumps all over my body just because of your damn poster, man you sure do know how to scare a guy
DUDE ZELO YOU CANT DIE YOU CANT GIVE UP NOW MAN YONGGUK MAY STILL BE ALIVE
ertedKpopFan
#2
Chapter 7: ZELO CAN'T DIE!! ____, HE JUST CAN'T!!
-esque #3
omg, i only saw your trailer and i'm already getting excited to read this.
exoluhan4ever #4
your poster.. scared the crap out of me! it's night now! i thibk it is going to be awesome, just by seeing the poster
angelzs2
#5
Chapter 7: SCAAAAARYYYYYYYYYYY.
Zelo... Poor Zelo died. TT
mybabyrapper
#6
But I think I am young for this~ *pouts cutely* But you are a great writer~ ^^
mybabyrapper
#7
Update~~~ ^^ *giggles* I am so happy~ Thank you~ ^^
melisshi
#8
Chapter 7: Author-nim! You better not make Zelo die!
Or I'm going to cry ;(
And where's Yongguk in all of this?
GlassHeartedAngel #9
Chapter 7: Zelo better not die ill cry and throw a fit lol