A Bad Picture Day and Kunhee's Makeover?!

I'm The New Foreign Exchange Student
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Chapter 26 updated! Next update: 11/24/12 (my time and I am going to try to be ON TIME!) :) Sooooo!! I finally updated chapter 26! I have been SUPER busy with school, martial arts, tutoring, and taking care of my grandfather. My papa has been in the hospital and he just got out on Thursday. He had a full knee replacement. I missed 2 or 3 days of school to visit him at the hospital two hours away. Sooo! I have a lot of make up homework. Taekwondo schedule has been super crazy. I am tutoring my friend from Vietnam. He is the exchange student this year and he failed English. So as the good friend I am, I am helping him for free :). And he knows about SHINee!! :) He is actually a fan of Korean movies, dramas, music, etc! :) Guess what!? This is my longest chapter. On average, I write about 4,000 words. This was about 6,800 words! And sorry if it doesn't make much sense or if it is bad. I tried to rush to finish by today. I had a hard time writing at times too. Comments would be very encouraging. :) Tell me what you think, suggestions, who else should be added to the story, who you would like to see more of, another, anything you want! Tell me your opinion so I can make it more enjoyable to read! :)   Comment :) Subscribe :) Enjoy :) Sorry if some parts don't really make any sense, I didn't get a chance to triple read it yet. I will fix my errors when I get a chance during the week. And if it is rated M so far, it is basically because of language or mild actions. ✎✐✎✐✎✐✎✐✎✐✎✐✎✐✎✐✎✐✎✐✎✐✎✐✎✐✎✐✎✎✐✎ *Your POV* Burr! It is getting cold out! I dress in jeans, a cute shirt, a fleece jacket, a scarf, and a pair of slip on bear paws. Definitely a comfy Wednesday. To finish getting ready, I just have to make my hair curly. I quickly make loose curls in my hair with the curling iron and part it to the side. All it needs is a clip to keep it out of my face. Time to head off to school and see my handsome boyfriend :).   "Awe, what a cutie today." Minho said grabbing my hands. "It’s picture day! Of course I need to look nice." I said with a smile. "You look nice everyday." he said trying to up. "Psh. up." I said jokingly. "No… of course not! I truly think you are beautiful." he said giving me a kiss on the cheek. "Oh stop~" I said shyly. "Babe. I told you before not to be so shy…. We are dating, no need to be so shy." he said pushing my back against the lockers easily. I put my hands on his chest as he puts his forearms above my head and against my locker. "Are you nervous?" he asked looking into my eyes, using his y voice. "Just kiss me already." I said smiling. He smiles and his lips meet mine for a sweet kiss. "Hey, no kissing in the hall." I heard a guy say. We slowly let go and look to see who it is. Just who I thought… L. Joe. "Hey, L. Joe!" I said with a smile. "I see you two are having a good day so far." he said. "Mhm. Kissing my girlfriend always starts my day off good." Minho said with a smile. "I am sure it does." L. Joe said. "So, what's up?" I asked. "I don't know. Just thought I would come over and hang with you two." he said. "Ohh, ok! You ready for picture day?" I asked. "Of course. By the way, you look great for pictures." he complimented me. "Psh, stop flirting." Minho said to L. Joe. "I'm not flirting. I can't compliment people?" L. Joe said. "I am just kidding." Minho said. "Alright, alright." L. Joe said. "Minho…." I said to get his attention. "Mhm?" he mumbled. "Skype me tonight?" I asked. "No, I don’t get my laptop back until Friday." "Please…?" "Baby, I would if I could." "Please? I miss talking to you until I fall asleep." "There is no way for me to until Friday." "Alright." "Don’t be sad…." he said gently caressing my face. "But I miss it." I said with a fairly sad tone. "Don’t be sad. You are too adorable to be sad." he said right before giving me a sweet kiss. "Eww, trying to be romantic." Key said coming over. "Key, you are here early." L. Joe said. "Yeah. It is picture day and I needed to be here to make sure I looked good. Make sure my hair didn’t get messed up or stains on my shirts." Key said texting. "Ready to head to first period, babe?" Minho asked taking my hand. "Mhm. The bell is about to ring." I said looking at my phone for the time. "Well, see you later." L. Joe said. "Yeahh. See you later. I need to go find Jonghyun." Key said leaving. "Bye." Minho and I said as we head off to math class.   *Minho's POV* "Stop acting so adorable!" I said before kissing the tip of my girl's nose. "I'm not…!" she said giggling. "Such a flirt today." I said to . "Nope. You are!" "Ohh yeah… totally…." I started, "Telling me to kiss you." I said with a wink. "Then stop seducing me…!" she said blushing. "Awe…. Your blushing just makes you look even cuter. You just look so adorable today! I just want to kiss you all day long and hear your sweet giggles." I said to even more. She hides her face with her hands. I take them, pull them away, and hold them. "Stop hiding your beautiful face." I said get a caring smile from her. It worked<3 Her eyes soften and her smile turns even more gorgeous. "Stop making my heart melt." she said before pecking my cheek. "Cutie, I love you." "I love you, too." The bell rigs as I give her a cute peck on the lips. Everyone starts coming in the classroom. "Looks like no Kunhee today!" I said to my girl. "Hopefully not." she said giggling. "Well, the only girl I want straddling my lap is you." I said with a flirtatious wink. Awe, her face turned super red. How cute..! Being a little erted there I guess. Haha. "Minho…!" she said laughing. "It's true…. I would let you straddle or just even sit on my lap any day." "Good." she said giggling a blushing slightly. "Good? Mhm." "Ok class, we are about to begin." the teacher said. I hold my girlfriends hand under the table as the bell rings. "You were able to do your homework alright?" I asked her quietly. "Mhm." she mumbled. Class begins. The teacher has us takes some notes up from the board. Then we get to work in partners… with my babe<3 "Babe, be my partner?" I asked her. "Mhm. Aren't I always?" she said placing her hand back in mine. "I know, just making sure." I said with a smile.   …30 minutes later… "We finished early." I said to my girl. "Yes, that is a good thing." she said lacing her fingers with mine. "Mhm. Now I have time to talk to you, cutie." I said giving her hand a gentle squeeze. "Yeah." she said with a big smile. "I can't wait until gym class." "Ew. Why?" "Because we are doing a run around the perimeter of the school." "Eww!" she complained. "Babe, it will be fun. I will run with you." "You know how long that is?" "Hun, it is only about three miles. Not that bad." "Is there any other alternatives?" "How about I hold your hand as we run?" "No…. I will still hate it." "Running is fun." "No me gusta correr!" she said in a different language. "What?" I look at her confused. "It's 'I don’t like to run' in Spanish." "Now you are going all Spanish on me?" I said teasing her. "No. I just don’t like running." "Psh. I can make you like running." "Ha! Yeah right. Try me." "I will think of a way." "Good luck with that." "You will see." I said with a wink. "Mhm. Ok, whatever you say." I laugh at her stubbornness and give her a kiss on the cheek. "I have arrived!" some girl said. Whoa! Who is that?! Is that girl new or something? But she looks and sounds like someone I know. She has long, curly black hair, brown eyes with circle lenses, and braces. She is wearing a pair of ripped jeans, bear paws, and a plaid shirt with a tank top underneath. "Kunhee?!" I heard a guy say. "KUNHEE?!" I shouted with big eyes. "Yes, it is me!" she said spitting. Yup. It is that llama :/. "Wow. You got a makeover. Looking great." a guy said. "She does look pretty good." my girlfriend whispered. "Psh. Not nearly as good as you do, gorgeous." I said to her, making her giggle. "MINHO!" that llama said coming over here. I make a disgusted face. She just takes a seat across for me. "AM I PRETTY?!" she said spitting in my face. "No." I simply said while whipping the spit off my face. "WHY DON'T YOU LIKE ME!?" she said spitting and starting to cry. "I don’t hate you, hate you." "Yes you do!!" "I just don’t like the way you act." "You don’t like me because you are dating that American!" Oh my god. Just shut her up! "No, it is the way you act. Do you think I like getting my smacked all the time? And you straddling me and my face? And now you harassing my girlfriend?" "How do you think I feel!? I loved you for years and you always rejected me?!" "I don’t want you as a girlfriend. And maybe if you didn’t start harassing me from the beginning, I would have wanted you to be my friend." "Whatever!! I don’t care!! I will get over you!!" she said spitting on us and crying her eyes out as the bell rang.   *Kunhee's POV* I did all this for him! How could he still reject me?! I look pretty. Prettier than that stupid American. "Kunhee!?" Jinae said. "What?" I said wiping my tears. "You look pretty nice." "I don't care." "What's wrong?" "Minho doesn’t think that I am pretty." "Minho is Minho. His heart is set on _______. He is in love with her." "He should love me." "Kunhee, you need to get over him." "But I can't." I said in a sad tone. "I will help you get over him." she offered. "You will?" I said with excitement. "Mhm. You are honestly not my favorite person, but I am willing to help." "Ok." "Ok, keep looking like you do today. We will find you a boyfriend." "I get my braces off next week." "Really?" "Yes, and that will help with my spitting problem." "Alright. We will start next week." "Thank you." "You're  welcome." "I really appreciate it even thought you don’t really like me." "Again, you're welcome." "What are we going to do?" I asked with curiosity. "I am going to take you out and find you a guy." she replied. "Really?" "Yeah. I know this pretty hot guy at the café. I don't know if you go there often." "No, I don’t." "He is one of the workers. I can't remember his name though." "Does he go to the school?" "No, a different one." "Oh, ok." "He has a nice body by the looks." "Really?" "Mhm. I saw his shirt go up once. He has some pretty nice abs." she said quietly. "Wow… do you think he would like me?" I said in amaze. "We will try it." she said with a smile. "Ok." I said with a smile.   *Your POV* "Key!" I said laughing. "What? That’s what he wants." he said. "Psh. Right." "It is! He wants you straddling him." "He never directly said that. He said that the only one he wants to straddling him is me." "In other words, he wants you to straddle him." "Nope." "Mhm. You know you would." "I never said I wouldn’t… I just don’t want to think about that now." "Why not? You will give in." "Psh, yeah right." "Minho will seduce you and you will give in." "Yes, because he is just that hot." I said scarastically. "Don’t use that tone with me. And I know you think he is the iest guy you have ever seen. You think he is soooo hot!" he said teasing me. "Yes, he is sooooo hot!" "See! You know he is y." "I know, I know." "Yeah. I know you like his abs." "Ugh. They are gorgeous." I said blushing slightly. "And you felt them…!" "Mhm." ". " he said to tease. "Nope. I was trying to get Kunhee mad." "Right…" "I did enjoy making out with him, but still." "Hahahaha!! See!!" he said laughing. "Ohh hush it!" I said hiding my face. "I am going to tell him." "Mhm. Alright… doesn’t matter to me Key." I said with confidence. "Ok. I will." he said teasing. "Ok class, lets head down for pictures." the teacher said. We all get up and head to the gym, where they are taking the pictures. L. Joe catches up with me. "Hey." I said with a smile. "Heyy. You know, you look really cute today?" he said trying to flirt.? "Thanks. And are you trying to flirt?" I asked. "No. I am only telling the truth." "Ok, ok." I said with a smile. "But I mean, what guy wouldn’t?" "Ohh stop it!" I said lightly hitting his arm. "Seriously…you are cute." "Ok, L. Joe." I said getting in line. "Smile big." he said standing right behind me. "I will." It was my turn. she has me take a seat and do the pose. Of course, I have to smile big. And seeing Minho's smile near the end of the line made me smile even more. The lady takes my picture and now I am free to go back to my class. I walk over to Minho really quick. He takes my hand. "Hey, gorgeous." he said with a smile. "Heyy, handsome." I said with a smile, blushing slightly. "Ohh, I am handsome?" he asked with a wink. "Mhm. I need to get back to class now." "Ok, quick kiss." He gives me a cute peck on the lips and makes an adorable kissing noise. "See you later." he said. "Bye." I said heading back off to class.   I go down the hallway and stop at my locker for a book. Gosh! I need to organize my things! Suddenly, I feel a pair of hands wrap around my waist from behind. Minho is back already? "Hey, Minho." I said searching for my book. "Don’t call me Minho." a deep voice said… that wasn't Minho's..!!!! "L-Let go of m-me…!" I said trying to pry the arms off me. "You are too sweet to let go." he stranger said kissing my neck. I try elbowing him but it isn't working! "Who are you..?!" I asked starting to panic. "I am a student teacher…" he said starting to bring his hands up my shirt. I can't gets under the arms so I can flip this ert! "P-Please!! S-Stop it!" I could feel tears threatening in my eyes. I try hitting and thrashing. But he only picks me up and brings me to the janitors closet. "LET ME GO!!" I tried to scream as his hand covered my face. I start flailing my body but he is too strong. I try kicking and hitting and punching and biting and scratching. Nothing is working!!! "Little girl, I am a 2nd Dan black belt in taekwondo, 1st Dan in judo and jujitsu. So don’t you be hitting me!" he said shoving me down on the ground. "P-Please. Don’t hurt me." I said as tears escaped my eyes. Where is Minho?! I need him…! "Ohh, this won't hurt a bit." he said taking something out of his pocket. Is that a… OH MY GOD!! He is going to do that to me?! I try to get up and escape. But I can't do anything. He is too strong. He pounces on to of me and pins me down. I can't move at all. He kisses my lips so it will muffle my noise. I keep thrashing to try to escape. I am so scared..! "Stop moving!!" he shouted and hit me across the face. I hear someone on the other side of the door. "HELP!" I scream as loud as I can. "WHAT DID I SAY!?" he said slapping me again. He starts to take off my cloths. I just hit him and kick him and thrash so he will get them off. I never knew I would be so defenseless. "Is someone in there?" I heard a voice ask. "HEL-" I started but the creeper covered my mouth. I whoever is out there pounding on the door. It automatically locked. This guy
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Junaierra
#1
Chapter 40: To be continued???? ❤
Junaierra
#2
Chapter 4: The first person to comment on 2017!!! LOL xD
Tbh, this story is too straight forward but i like it. ^_^
Nominri #3
Chapter 35: Ha first 2014 comment!!...?
Anyways.... This is so good!! I got all the way to chapter 35 in two nights!! Hopefully you met think of finishing this? This is one of the best fanfic I've ever read!!
Anna_Banana #4
daesung & jonghyun!
dreamgirlSM #5
Chapter 33: This story is really really great! :D
woulaskywalker
#6
Chapter 7: Yay, first comment in year 2013!! :D
Though I haven't finished the story yet, it's very good so far :)
But in your next/new story, try writing in past tense, - I think that's more comfortable ^^
snshutt #7
Chapter 27: I really really really really love this story!!!! I love everything about it! Please update soon!! <3 :)))
anime96 #8
Chapter 27: Chapter 27 is so cute and sweet
anime96 #9
What a cute couple :-)
Locketz
#10
Chapter 26: they are scute together!