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[reposted from the 366 #laublops2016 challenge on Twitter]

some things:

1) each chapter is gonna be super, super brief bc they're freeform length

2) i AM going to finish edits; this isn't a new fic, it's was finished a month ago and im just reposting it here

3) sorry if i dont reply to every comment, but i always upvote all the comments that i've read! 

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czankx #1
Chapter 20: It's been awhile i cried after reading Taeny stories, it just felt realistic and hit to the bones, i guess it's true dogs are just built different, somehow they're just therapeutic, they mend broken hearts, they make families closer, i brought home a dog too from college, everyone from the family doesn't hate dog much but they don't like the idea of having a dog inside the house, but the puppy i brought was too chubby and hairy and white and small that it would be bad to put outside, so i took care of it inside the house, until I have to go back for school and my parents especially my mom, took over, and also my sister that was trying to put the dog away was now the one hugging her to sleep, it just makes us talk to each other, i can imagine us drifting apart if the dog was not in the picture.. So I'm so happy that TaeNy got back together, and Tiffany brought ginger at a perfect time before Taeyeon could break everything off
malfynger #2
Chapter 20: I'm crying, the story is so beautiful and realistic somehow. Thank you for making this authornim.
Worra235 #3
Chapter 20: Im touched. It maybe a short story but it sends me. Thank you for this. I guess relationships goes through this kind of stage and wishing every relationship ends like theirs.
girlofeternity_ss #4
You've made me want them to work and rebuild what they have before and it was beautiful how they have loved each other again.
BlueHoodie
#5
Chapter 20: Ok, this is good too
mikanmanju
#6
Chapter 20: that was some real angst lol, it was beautiful :)
mikanmanju
#7
Chapter 2: cold taeyeon, very cold 'bbrrr
angel_lamb13
#8
Chapter 20: This made me cry. I just love this story so much. Thank you for writing this beautiful story author.
cmblue3930
#9
Chapter 20: This is a nice story. Very realistic.