Part 7.5

Daughter of Darkness, Son of Light
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A/N:

So, I decided to start on the next chapter, which I reallyyy enjoyed writing BTW. It was so fun to write and articulate the fight scenes although this is my first one. I wanted to make this a separate chapter but it was too short for that but i couldn't just glue it to the previous chapter since it kinda ended on the perfect note.

So, I apologise if this a bit too short, and please critise me about this fight because it will a lot of fighting going on in the future so I don't want it to be wonky.

Enjoyy!

It was dawn already and Rose was patiently waiting for her instructor to arrive at the grass area. Hana was beside her to monitor the session as ordered by Ms. Lee. She could visibly see that Rose was nervous and agitated. It was her first time being taught by someone else other than her Father, Gremor.


“Ms. Park, look!” Hana suddenly said, making the girl even more agitated as she looked toward the gate.


There, a woman, probably in her early thirties or late twenties walked towards them. From distance, she was of fair height but it is when she walked closer that Rose realized that the woman was far shorter from her.


The instructor walked up to Rose and gave a soft smile as if it to ease the awkward atmosphere that surrounds them. She then let out her hand and says:


“You must be Roseanne Park, I’ve heard quite about you from Ms. Lee. My name is BoA and from now on I’ll be training you for the upcoming Grand Magic Tournament”


Frozen in her stance, Rose did not know what to do but stare until Hana softly calls her name to which she let out her hand and shook hands with her new mentor, BoA.


After that, BoA placed her heavy suitcase on a nearby bench and removed her coat. As usual, Rose did nothing but stare.


“Now, shall we start?” BoA says calmly and gave out an eye smile towards Rose as if to calm her down as well.


Rose looked back at Hana to which she nodded and stepped back.


“The first thing we are going to do is determine your physical level and to do that you are going to fight me”


As soon as Rose heard those words she became more anxious. She has never fought someone in a duel before, much likely her Father. The only things she did was to practice and learn new spells to cast. If she is this scared for just a regular duel like this was she even remotely prepared for the actual tournament? Is she even going to beat her destined opponent? Surely, she can’t just die like that, wouldn’t she? I mean, this is precisely why Ms. Lee was kind enough to assign a mentor to her, to be prepared both mentally and physically.


Rose looked in front of herself where BoA was preparing her fightin

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rosebae #1
Chapter 3: this is chapter is written so good
BanaWarrior
#2
Chapter 10: I only hope that Rose can grow confident over time. A.k.a she can surpass her traumas. It will take a lot of time and effort, but it's not Impossible, right?
And a New mysterious character! What Jinyong is? What he wants? What is his message? XD haha
Jenduekie #3
Chapter 10: Ouhhh jiyong nice
BanaWarrior
#4
Chapter 9: It's good to see this story comming back. :3
And I'm really happy that Rose is with Ms. Lee. Somewhat Ms.Lee gives me Howl vibes xD hahaha

And about the fighting scenes, I do think this one turned pretty good for a first time. If course it's not perfect, but it's good! :3 Although I don't write much, I had read many many different fighting scenes, and what I can say to help is to always keep in mind the mood. If you want It short and powerful, If you want It dramatic or even if you want It lighthearted, always keep that in mind to adjust the writting to the mood. And I think that in general, fighting scenes should give a good flowing while reading and not be too much descriptive/flowery. I Hope this helps :3
Keep the good work! X3
Marichu2ne1 #5
Chapter 6: Yyayyy they finally met! Can't wait for more
pjmtrash #6
Chapter 6: They finally met yess
ROSEANNEinyourarea
#7
Chapter 6: I squeal when he introduced himself >•< They finally met! The chapter is nice and gets us all excited for next ^-^
ROSEANNEinyourarea
#8
Chapter 5: Too fast Jimin, too fast :(
ROSEANNEinyourarea
#9
Chapter 4: Yay! Rosé can finally live her life freely. I feel like Jimin wouldn't kill her father, it's just not him!
ROSEANNEinyourarea
#10
Chapter 1: I like the way you describe. Slightly short but it's packed.