Part 2

Daughter of Darkness, Son of Light
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‘I-I can’t do it, Father!’
 

‘I can’t believe you’re this pathetic.’
 

For the fifth time, Rosé felt a hard rock hit her back. She bit her lip as she beared the pain. No matter how many times she tried to call upon her powers, she failed miserably resulting to punishments from her Father.
 

‘This is your twelfth try and you are still not able to do it. I am ashamed to call you my daughter. You are sleeping outside again you weakling’ he hissed in disgust.
 

‘But Father, I’ve been sleeping outside for the past few days. It’s cold outside’
 

‘If you’re cold then why don’t you call on your powers? You’ll be much warmer’ Gremor says as he disappeared into the shadows leaving the girl on her own in the middle of the dark foggy forest.
 

 

She looked around to make sure he left and after she made sure he was not around anymore she placed her thumb and index finger on and started to whistle loudly as it echoed throughout the forest. [I think that’s how people do it, but idk, i can't whistle]
 

After a few moments of silence, Rosé heard galloping from behind her. She looked back and a smile appeared on her lips.
 

 

‘Fawn!’
 

 

A beautiful and elegant deer was standing in front her looking so tall and superior which made her look tiny. Its tree-like horns silhouetted through the moonlight and Rosé was stunned once again by its naturalistic beauty.
 

Fawn stepped towards the girl and lowered its head to the same level as the girl. Rosé softly patted its muzzle while saying
 

‘I missed you, Fawn. Shall we go now?’
 

When her father punished her to sleep outside, Fawn would sleep beside her giving her the warmth she needed. She was the only friend that Rose has in this dark and lonely forest. Of course, Rosé tried to escape this place but it would have no end. She believes it is the spell that the Father cast upon the forest so Rosé won’t escape the place.
 

Gremor Park, the mage of the darkness, shadows, and nightmares. He has no mercy and he believes Roseanne must be the same: evil and merciless.

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rosebae #1
Chapter 3: this is chapter is written so good
BanaWarrior
#2
Chapter 10: I only hope that Rose can grow confident over time. A.k.a she can surpass her traumas. It will take a lot of time and effort, but it's not Impossible, right?
And a New mysterious character! What Jinyong is? What he wants? What is his message? XD haha
Jenduekie #3
Chapter 10: Ouhhh jiyong nice
BanaWarrior
#4
Chapter 9: It's good to see this story comming back. :3
And I'm really happy that Rose is with Ms. Lee. Somewhat Ms.Lee gives me Howl vibes xD hahaha

And about the fighting scenes, I do think this one turned pretty good for a first time. If course it's not perfect, but it's good! :3 Although I don't write much, I had read many many different fighting scenes, and what I can say to help is to always keep in mind the mood. If you want It short and powerful, If you want It dramatic or even if you want It lighthearted, always keep that in mind to adjust the writting to the mood. And I think that in general, fighting scenes should give a good flowing while reading and not be too much descriptive/flowery. I Hope this helps :3
Keep the good work! X3
Marichu2ne1 #5
Chapter 6: Yyayyy they finally met! Can't wait for more
pjmtrash #6
Chapter 6: They finally met yess
ROSEANNEinyourarea
#7
Chapter 6: I squeal when he introduced himself >•< They finally met! The chapter is nice and gets us all excited for next ^-^
ROSEANNEinyourarea
#8
Chapter 5: Too fast Jimin, too fast :(
ROSEANNEinyourarea
#9
Chapter 4: Yay! Rosé can finally live her life freely. I feel like Jimin wouldn't kill her father, it's just not him!
ROSEANNEinyourarea
#10
Chapter 1: I like the way you describe. Slightly short but it's packed.