CRITERIA

A Lion's Roar Review Shop (feat. VIXX's Leo) ARCHIVES

First Impressions - *This is where I will skim over your Foreword. Some questions I will answer: How is your overall layout? Is it appealing? Am I interested so far?

Title - *I will go into a detailed account about your Title. What impression do I get from the title alone? Is it appealing? What can be improved?

Foreword/Description - *I will go into a detailed account about your Foreword. Does it grab my attention? If so, where? If not, what can be improved? Can anything be added? I won't be very harsh here since I know that most authors organize their forewords in different ways.

Plot - *This will be an honest opinion about your plot. You are free to take the advice/suggestions that I give. You are also free to reply back to this if it isn't to your liking. I will most likely be looking for originality here, though I know that some stories are spin-offs.

Characterization - *Truthfully, this is where I get very passionate. I may or may not be brutal, just a warning. You are free to take the advice/suggestions that I give. You are also free to reply back to this if it isn't to your liking. I will be looking for character depth, especially your main characters. What about your characters makes your story approachable? Do your characters have chemistry or are they harmonious within your story?

Grammar/Sentence Flow - *I won't lie; I'm quite the Grammar Nazi, since I'm an English Major. However, I will not bash your grammar. Instead, I will look for constructive ways to improve your grammar and conventions. My goal is not to degrade you, but to help you become a better writer (even if you are an amazing writer already).

Style/Diction - *This is a writer's most important characteristic. To have your own style and way of telling your story is crucial. Instead of providing constructive criticism here, I will give my honest opinion on how your Style/Diction attracted ME.

Overall Impression - *A basic conclusion of my thoughts.

Additional Comments - *Anything that I would like to add to my review.

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