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Anonymous don't you hate that you're running away? or are you a monster because you refuse to stop running?
replies I'm a monster because I don't care enough to stop.
Chapter 9: This chapter got me thinking... The thought of happiness and sadness being a short lived emotion, it makes sense that apathy would be the opposite. Deep thoughts there... I love it!
Chapter 5: 'I cannot watch my brother turn to ashes' was so impactful!! I really enjoy how you set the emotional level at a just right pace. Not overbearing, but the perfect balance that makes the words stick.
It's amazing!!
Chapter 3: This story just gets better and better! I'll work on my karma points so that I can upvote lol.
I like the way you express things, really makes the scene play out. Great job!
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