Hey guys,

It's me nzone89. I was reading your comment's ealier and realized I actually made the story more confused by writing in POV. I never wrote in 3rd person point of view before. I didn't realize switching back and forth between POV is confusing because I had the whole story in my mind. Also I am used to write in like that. I am sorry for not understanding that quickly. So I am gateful for pointing it out to me. Because of that I actually read about writing in 3rd person POV and re-write my chapters (Chapter 2 and 3). So, if you have time please read that chapters again... Once again, I am thankful for every comment, upvote and hope to see you soon.. maybe with a sequel to this... I'll let my co-author announce it :)

See you guys... Have a nice day.