Crossing the line

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Jimin...Jungkook...Love...Hate...
 

Foreword

Hei guys. This is my fiiiiirst story and i know my english is horrible :( I'm sorry. 

I love JiKook so much <3 I will try to Update as soon  as possible.

Thanks for reading.

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luvarin #1
Chapter 5: Next chapter author-nim.. cant wait.. :).. your english is just fine.. no worry.. fighting. (^O^)/
belinha1045 #2
Chapter 5: Kyaaaa
Yeahhhhh
Kfneskdamzwnwzown
I LOVE IT
Can't wait for the next chapter*--*
MaRiin
#3
Chapter 5: Oh god, this was so cute >.<
belinha1045 #4
Chapter 4: Ahhhhhhhhh
Finally kookie!
Jimin he is not playing with youuu!!!
Aigoooo
Can't wait for more*-*
jikookjikook #5
Chapter 4: FinallyJungkookie!! >.<
Update juseyo :)
faith3_13 #6
Chapter 4: This last chapter was awesome, finally Jungkook opened his mouth, hopefully things go well from now on.
MaRiin
#7
Chapter 4: We like your story because it is really great!!
Thank you for the update, it was great!
belinha1045 #8
Chapter 3: I'm really liking this >.<
Can't wait for the next chap*-*
babyjimin95
#9
Chapter 3: Come on, Jungkook..just admit that..the truth that you're falling for your bandmate...hey author-nim, your english is better than me so it's okay o_< can't wait for the next update~
MaRiin
#10
Chapter 3: Great chapter! Just like the other ones :D
I find your English to be quite good but if it "bothers" you, why not get a beta reader or something like that?