R: BambiDear
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n which Sehun writes a letter to his boyfriend, Luhan.
› Title [ 10/10 ] I loved the way it suited your one shot so perfectly. At first, I was very confused about the “Case One” part, but when the plot came to an end, I finally understood.
› Foreword and Description [ 9/10 ] It would have been nice to get more information on it, but when I saw that you’ve got two other oneshots towards this one, I was glad! On the side note, the description was short and sweet.
› Plot [ 20/20 ] Damn, this was amazing, I actually cried at some parts! This was written beautifully, this plot was probably the most mysterious one I have read so far. I loved the way you described the past, and how it flowed throughout the life that Luhan had. The love that Sehun had for him was undeniable, and unforgettable. I liked the way you didn't rush this one shot, it's like watching a movie, only you are reading it.
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