R: BambiDear

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n which Sehun writes a letter to his boyfriend, Luhan.                                                                                                                                       

› Title [ 10/10 ] I loved the way it suited your one shot so perfectly. At first, I was very confused about the “Case One” part, but when the plot came to an end, I finally understood.

› Foreword and Description [ 9/10 ] It would have been nice to get more information on it, but when I saw that you’ve got two other oneshots towards this one, I was glad! On the side note, the description was short and sweet.

› Plot [ 20/20 ] Damn, this was amazing, I actually cried at some parts! This was written beautifully, this plot was probably the most mysterious one I have read so far. I loved the way you described the past, and how it flowed throughout the life that Luhan had. The love that Sehun had for him was undeniable, and unforgettable. I liked the way you didn't rush this one shot, it's like watching a movie, only you are reading it.

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Cassone59
#1
Chapter 63: Thank you so so much! I seriously love the poster!
I've collected it! Thank you!!!
ByunSweety
#2
Still waiting to get the poster... TnT I've requested since February... Please don't forget me master nim... :'(
leadervibes
#3
Chapter 60: Random commenter passing through! I really like this last poster but I noticed there was a typo. It says "You can get more time, but you cannot get more time."
hellgoddess
#4
Chapter 59: well i'm quite pleased with it but if you think you can make something better than this which by the way i like it i would very grateful i can keep this one and you can redo it but if it's too much to ask or you're busy then it's no problem ^-^
00kaiholic00
#5
Sorry but can I cancel my request for Connected? Thanks.
MissMinew
#6
Chapter 58: is that diamonds?? the color is beautiful, it fits the poster really well. uwu
it has a sad feeling to it that isn't all that angsty but its very beautiful. i actually sort of feel it for the story. its actually kind of inspiring me to continue writing mors voluntaria, lol.
i suppose the few readers of mine will be happy with that, haha.
but thank you so much for your time and for creating this, it's incredibly beautiful. <3
yehetballs #7
Chapter 57: I just requested, and I hope everything is explained properly but i also wanted the creator not to be too restricted and more free willed
Banana654321
#8
Chapter 7: requested for a poster and bg :) thanks