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imin is suffocating and Yoongi knows. Yoongi's internally dying and Jimin knows. Jimin wants to help but first has to help himself.

› Title [ 5/10 ] Well, the story was good, but it didn't match the title very well. "Which Path To Take" sort of sounds like a story where the character has to make difficult choices, whereas in this story there was barely any mention of choosing a path besides at the end. (Even at the end it didn't really fit, about the "Let's take this path together okay? We'll go through it all, good and bad." I don't know where this came from.)

› Foreword and Description [ 8/10 ] The description was great. Like. It was wonderful. It made me really excited to read the story (Cuz I'm a er for angst and BTS) so I was really anticipating the reading. It's really short, but it got the message through so I guess it was okay. However, the story didn't really coincide with the description so that was kind of a letdown. I expected more angst and a deeper explanation about Yoongi and Jimin's problems. 

› Plot [ 14/20 ] Well the idea for the story was good, but I think that it was way too short to explain everything clearly. You sped everything up way too quickly, especially when Jimin woke up from the dream and immediately assumed that Yoongi was going to kill himself. I mean, how does he know that? And also why is he suddenly crying when he sees Jin, when just a few seconds ago he was determined to go find Suga? It's all really pus