Chapter 3: That is it?! Really, are you kidding me. Ugh! This is so frustrating. I was getting all heated up with this chapter. It's whacking my brain nerves you know. I hate things like these. Its pretty much stressing. Though I was happy it took them four years to be together until happens. I suddenly remembered a lot of stuffs. He was sick and is about to die but then I think she wanted to die first. O My Gosh! He knew all along and yet he confused me as well. He would be sweet some other times and the next thing I knew he started being a bastard. Though I think this story is not yet finished. I was still thinking whether she dies or what. Please make another chapter for me to understand further more.

Chapter 2: It is not like the other stories with a Lame-O written all over. For once or twice I think this is the best you've written so far and I'm quite impressed. It made my heart thump from its ribcage that I almost thought its going to whack its way out. Luckily it doesn't, just yet. I loved this chapter. Its been a long time an somehow it was still funny when I remembered her telling him I love you on the first day they met. They were so cute especially that time when he entered to confess and I can't help but feel giddy at the same time when their conversation is on air. Ugh! I love this two :)

Chapter 1: Oh yeah, and that I love you part... I didn't see that coming as well. But I was heart broken with Danger's reply.

Chapter 1: Somehow it was hard remembering who's who but then that's okay. I guess I'm not just used with them having other names. Besides I think the start was good. I hooe to read more of this. I can't wait to read the second chapter. I'm sorry since I found most of their names ... funny. Especially the lead girl's name, Lemon. Recently she just broke up with Tyler, right? And then she has the same name as Danger's ex. Which I thought was weird. No offense. Anyways, I appreciate this chapter.

Chapter 2: Of all romance stories I've read so far, chapter 2 is really the one that make me feel butterfly in my stomach <3 I mean it!!
but to be honest, chapter 3 is a super cliff-hanger for me XD
Good Job ^_^ Hope you can still make more stories, I really enjoyed it <3

Chapter 3: This was really well-written :) i enjoyed reading this. Good job! :)

Chapter 3: Can i just say i felt my feels' feels after this? I'm just glad her assumptions weren't true. but then.. gosh, this is just, i wasn't prepared for that T^T

Chapter 1: Gaah. That was awkward XD Lemon. Lemon. I wonder if he's thinking about his ex or genuinely interested in her

Chapter 2: OMG. I JUST DIED IN THIS SWEETNESS. TOO MUCH FLUFF. TOO MUCH-- UGGHHH. <3

Chapter 1: OMG. THIS IS SO... WAAA. I FEEL LIKE I ATE MANY CANDIES. <3