I'm a ghost who fell in love with a... VAMPIRE?!?

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YOUR POV

 

Suddenly, I heard it… footsteps… It was time… I hid… Maybe that was stupid because I was a ghost and no one could see me anyway… but no… it was all because of him… I knew he could sense my presence… he could see me…

He was with a new girl... his new prey...

 

She pulled his face near hers… making their lips touched… until they were kissing passionately… I looked away… I pity her because I knew… his next move would be the end of her…

Just then, I heard it… her scream… 

 

Minutes passed and the silence came back… I peeked once again… There she was… her lifeless body was lying on the ground…

She was dead… 

 

He wiped the blood at the corner of his lips… I could see it… his fangs… the tool he used to kill them… those women he brought here… those women he killed… for his thirst in blood...

Because he is...

...a vampire...

Foreword

Hi! Just want to say, I'm not good in writing this kind of story because I'm not that familiar about the facts on ghosts and vampires...

This is my first time writing about this. 

I just wanted to try writing one and if you guys won't like it, please tell me so that I'll know if I can really write one or not...

Thank u!

 

 

my other stories:

What is "Love"?: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/33196/what-is-love-dbsk-jaejoong-jessicajung-korean-kpop-snsd

It All Started In A Bet: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/78226/it-all-started-in-a-bet-dbsk-jaejoong-you

 

 

DATE: November 06, 2011

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peculiars
#1
Chapter 9: i was so HAPPY .. yea, literally .. when i saw your story on my NEW UPDATES NOTIFS!! goooossshhh!! author-nim .. i did not GIVE UP ON THIS FIC yeeeeeet~ omg. Jaejoong is Jaejooong .. and that will never change. words are not enough to explain what i feel about your story and your note author-nim .. overacting? no. this is what i feel. really! I AM GLAAAADDDDD!!
Aya_kim #2
Please update ! I love this fanfic <3
peculiars
#3
AIGOOO .. IT'S OKAY AUTHOR-NIM ....
I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS STORY FOR TOO LONG ..
BUT I UNDERSTAND YOU ><
iLoveExo12 #4
love it. . <br />
update soon :))
iLoveExo12 #5
love it. . <br />
update soon :))
MagicalRain4
#6
I want you to continue the story and the Christmas special one please.
OnTae_Lover
#7
NO NO NO NO NO~!!! ANDWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE~~~~<br />
CONTINUE PLEASEEEEEE~~~~~~~~ PLEASEEEEEE~~~<br />
JEBALLLLL~~~ *does aegyo*
peculiars
#8
it's soOOOO interesting~!!!! don't stop the STOOOORY yeet~!!! jebal~??
Aiden1234 #9
do it more!!~<br />
i want to know lore about them!!~<br />
the story is really good!!!!!~~<br />
i love it!!!