Bionic Reviews [CLOSED]

Description

A review shop where the user @d-odorant will give you honest and helpful reviews for you stories.

Foreword

❝WELCOME TO BIONIC REVIEWS!❞

I am the user d-odorant, but for sake of you all coming and asking for reviews, please use my name: Adriana. I’ve been writing for a while, so I know what it’s like to feel frustrated when you don’t know if people are giving you honest opinions on your story. So I am here to help!

I’m very honest when it comes to reviews, I don’t leave a single thing unturned and will point out as much as I can for you to improve. I will help you in any way I can.

If you have any questions feel free to contact me via e-mail or Twitter. Or through here, whichever is easier for you.

Rules:
  • Use my form.
  • Be patient.
  • Don't insult writers.
  • Don't insult me, I'm helping you out.
Payment(?)

There isn't payment, whether you choose to subscribe and/or upvote is up to you.

Form:
Title:
Link:
Length: (is it chaptered?)
Would You Like Me To Rate Your Story?
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Author's Thoughts
d-odorant
I know I said that the next two reviews would be up a while ago, but I haven't been feeling well lately. I haven't forgotten about your reviews.
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-Tigress- #1
Are you still completing the reviews? Just curious =)
iizitaoii #2
Title: Life's Game, Death's Gamble
Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/968271/life-s-game-death-s-gamble-fantasy-exo-luhan-tao-chanyeol-kris-supernartural
Length: 10 chapters atm
Would You Like Me To Rate Your Story? its not finished so whatever floats ur boat ^^
FlowerKNIGHT #3
Title: Coming Back To You
Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/835511/coming-back-to-you-daehyun-youngjae-daejae
Length: (is it chaptered?) : yes
Would You Like Me To Rate Your Story?: no
i'm sorry if you having hard time reading my story. :)
fefedove #4
Title: Aphelion
Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/949787/
Length: 3 chapters atm
Would You Like Me To Rate Your Story? nope

I have most of the story written, but need some honest feedback because I'm not really sure what I'm doing. Thanks in advance Adriana ^_^

p.s. the story is supposed to be non-linear, so any advice on how to make that work would be great too~
quinnstar #5
Chapter 3: Oh and actually I strongly advocated and meant for it to be the anti-cliche, but I guess it wasn't that clear oops >< Thanks for the feedback anw Adriana :)
quinnstar #6
Chapter 3: Thanks for the review! It must have taken you time to plow through my long-windedness XD I'll work hard for the next few chapters even if you don't want to read them :)
-Tigress- #7
Title: The Dead Woods
Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/915767
Length: (is it chaptered?) Yes, complete at ten
Would You Like Me To Rate Your Story? Either way, whichever is easier for you.
sleepybeans #8
Title: Marrying the Tuan Family
Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/883470
Length: It's chaptered. 28 at the moment and still ongoing
Rate: Sure! ^^
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