Surprise, Surprise (Again)

Third Time's The Charm
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Jesus answered, “The work of God is this: to believe in the one he has sent.”

John 6:29

Still smiling, Minhyuk quietly asked, “Can we go talk in a more private place?”

 

“Uh, yeah, sure.”

 

He led her out of the grand ballroom and into the quieter interior of the hotel. To Krystal’s surprise, they kept walking.

 

“Where are we going?” inquired Krystal.

 

“You’ll see,” Minhyuk replied airily. “Oh, and the party looks great, by the way.”

 

“I know,” she replied in a jokingly arrogant tone but abruptly shifting into an accusatory one, “But what took you so long? You could have actually enjoyed the party.” She added a glare for impact.

 

“I had something I needed to do.”

 

There it was again. That evasiveness. No direct answers. And that moment, Krystal knew something was up. But against her impulse, she decided to trust him and wait for him to explain on his own terms.

 

“So…” she began awkwardly at the same time Minhyuk said, “Krystal-”

 

“Oh, sorry,” they said simultaneously before bursting into laughter.

 

“You go first,” Minhyuk offered, but she shook her head.

 

“It’s nothing important,” she said truthfully. “Seriously,” she added when she caught his doubtful expression. “What were you going to say?”

 

“Well, I was just going to ask how you’ve been, that’s all.”

 

“Like after we finished this year?” she clarified.

 

“Yeah.”

 

“I’ve been very stress free, especially without Professor Song’s classes.” The two exchanged grins at her last phrase. “How about you?”

 

“Eh, I’ve been better.”

 

Worried by his ambiguity, she asked, “What’s wrong? You don’t have to tell me if you don’t want to, but-” Feeling too embarrassed to finish the sentence, she suddenly stopped.

 

“But?” he gently prodded.

 

“I’m here to listen,” she finished quietly.

 

Minhyuk smiled gratefully. “Well, I’ll tell you because I can trust you.”

 

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liltash85
#1
Just found out about this story. I am a Hyukstal fan and its getting hard to find new fanfic of them here. Can’t wait to read it.
000521
#2
oh my god ; ;; ;
syxb7z9
#3
Chapter 33: As a Hyukstal fan, I love their stories and really can't stand the ones with bad grammar which is probably why your fic attracted me :)
I'm a bit sad as well that now I can't really hope for them but I hope they're both happy anyhow! Anyways, happy to have found such a delighting fic, and the way you structured your updates really made me think to follow the same way as I always prewrite then fall behind otl ._.but hope you keep up the great writing :D
alammonayan
#4
Chapter 33: Huhuhu... i dont want to disrespect ur desicion but im really sad because there are a lot of hyukstal twitter accounts that disappear... and there are also a few hyukstal fanfics in english and this made me really sad... u know i just wish to read a lot of hyukstal stories because its just a delusion and the news really breaks my heart... huhuhu sorry for ranting... :(
maomaoo
#5
Chapter 33: Im sorry but I think it's up to you if you want to continue writing hyukstal, this is mainly fanfiction. it doesnt mean that u r disrespecting them or anything, u didnt do anything bad. Not forcing you to write some hyukstal again but its alright if u change ur mind too.
LYG9210 #6
Chapter 33: I think you can continue to write hyukstal.
Well it a STORY you are the WRITER, you can do anything. Hahah
Everyone know kaistyal is true but we can be what we want in story. Hahah. I think its ok
UphaUpe #7
Chapter 33: If you know how SM theory, then you will know when you will start writing about hyukstal again. I said this didnt hope they to broke up, but SM will be SM. Dating scandal just one of their way to increase money.
lalala01KMH
#8
Chapter 33: I believe it's okay to continue writing stories about them even though Krystal's dating someone in real life. For me, the fact that this is FICTION gives us the right to satisfy our imaginations regarding 'hyukstal' and it's not a bad thing, right (or it's just me thinking that way. Ha. Ha.)? Plus, as long as we don't obsess over these. :) So I hope you'll still write good stories whether it'd still be hyukstal or other couples. Fighting! :)
IntoTheFuture
#9
Chapter 33: I loved the Seulkai and Hyukstal in this. :)