Finding Home

Description

After being exiled from home, Lay makes a fantabulous friend who understands his loneliness; Chen. But the two of them soon realize that lonely is no way to live, and seek love in a sweetie with a big family and a cutie with an easy smile.

Foreword

          He sat beside him gingerly and smiled shyly. He waved and spoke rapidly, his voice gentle and smooth. Lay’s eyebrows knitted together and he shook his head slowly in sad confusion. The new boy stopped speaking and gulped.

          “I don’t understand.” Lay said as clearly as he could, but he still winced at how thick his accent is. Wow, no wonder nobody talks to me, he thought to himself.

          At first the new kid doesn’t seem to get it, and Lay watches the floor, waiting for him to give up on Lay and leave. They always do. But then he hears a soft laugh and he looks up to see the new boy, not mocking him, but smiling in understanding.

          The new kid tries again. He waves. “Hello” he states, enunciating carefully but not obnoxiously. He places a small pudgy hand to his chest. “Chen” he says. Then he points at Lay curiously, a question in his eyes.

          Lay’s dimples light up his face as he thumps a finger on his chest, “Lay” he says softly.

          “Hello, Lay” Chen says proudly.

          “Hello, Chen!” Lay says, excited to make such a kind new friend.

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Sugar-and-Salt
#1
Chapter 9: Yaaay, you're back ♫
XiuLay are back! And !(not really)
And SuChen are back! And sleeping together!(not really)
Kidding, I'm super happy x3
I really loved all the trouble Chen put himself through in order to keep up his lie. Then again, he would have never been able to spend such a Suho-ish time at the beach.
(Lay totally busted him later on, so I wonder if Suho will ever get back to this)

Good for them that the traffic was so SLOW. Otherwise I would've called them out for reckless driving :P
There's no joking about wearing seatbelts :P

Though I'm honestly not the type to drool over abs and people dramatically pulling a shirt over their head on stage gets nothing more than an annoyed roll of my eyes by now... I could never deny the iness of XiuXiu. NEVER. Though the internal image of midget Xiu carrying average-height Lay is kinda funny xD
Thanks for the update~ x3

P.S.: Yeah, if you have four kids... You can actually forget stuff once in a while. Sorry Lulu.
P.P.S.: I like how Chen's sass affects Lay as well. It makes sense. They're best friends, after all.
Sugar-and-Salt
#2
Chapter 8: This. Has been an open tab on my phone ever since it was uploaded.
But I refused to write a comment that long on my phone.

First of all Xiumin is very adorable and I'm glad he's such a patient guy and did NOT murder either Chen or Suho, even though he might have had a bunch of reasons to do so... xD

It will NEVER cease to amuse me how showy and self-confident Chen is... Until it gets down to business. Of course Suho's even more awkward and shy, so it all comes down to ChenChen's bravery, huh? Go get your maaaan...~

I love how the proposal was awkward af but still turned out nicely. That's reality for you. Finding perfection in the imperfection? Something like that.
It was such a cute chapter ♥

P.S.: As if Chen wouldn't be the FIRST to improve his PS skills just to troll other people...! xD
Sugar-and-Salt
#3
Chapter 7: Cute, cute, CUTE! c:
I think I like playful Lay the most ♡
And my love for Chen's no joke anyway.
No need to mention that.
Will Suho ever be able to tame the drama queen? Let's wish him a lot of patience! xD
I know a looot of people who are very, VERY unamused when woken up too early...
(I, for example, am always chill and friendly in the morning, but when forced to get up for NO reason at all I get very... Yeah, unamused might be euphemistic enough.)
shane00 #4
Chapter 6: This is hilarious
Sugar-and-Salt
#5
Chapter 6: Aaah how can your writing be so smooth?!
How can Chen be so perfectly sassy?
(Well, the crying part was perfectly manly. As manly as Luhan. No problem.)

This is one hell of a family he got there! xD
Never a dull moment~
But I also like the bond between Lay and Chen. It's as close to a family as you can get ♪

Uhm, uhmm... I don't know who I'd like to see next! I love XiuLay more, but as a person I love Chen the most...!
But I think I'm voting for XiuLay, since they didn't have a lot of moments yet~
Aaand, let's face it, y Xiu is HOT. He was even bold enough to flirt at his family's dinner table, my respects.
(But he got flustered over the cute dimples - adorable.)

Thanks for updating ♥︎
bananaicecream #6
Chapter 5: xiu does look like a hamster XD
that 'y onion' got me lol
chen's sassiness never cease to amaze me
Sugar-and-Salt
#7
Chapter 5: This chapter was pointless, but it made me smile so much, though~
I won't ever get tired of Chen's antics!
The horrible "you fell for me" joke was awesome! xD
But yes, I can already see the potential to a deep plot!
Still, especially Chen's moving faaast over there :P
He's not one to waste time now is he?
Thanks for the update ♡
bananaicecream #8
Chapter 4: deeeeaaarr goodness!! this is so fluffeeehhh im gonna dieeee!!!! happy dieee!!! fluffy xiulay is FLUFFEEEEHH
sassy chen is my king btw
kkkkk
nice story. all of them are so cute. and I dont think it went too slow. it was just right since each chapter was considerably short (in my opinion). it is good, it doesnt feel rushed ^^
Sugar-and-Salt
#9
Chapter 4: I have neeever in my life before found appeal in ChenHo. Never.
...This story so officially marks the first time!
I could perfectly imagine the awkward silence around the christmas tree~ And Chen's sass keeps being highly entertaining!
By the way, Xiu... You drank that cocoa hella fast, didn't ya.
Am I the only one to take forever with hot beverages? *sigh*
I don't think the chapters are progressing to slow, they just met, like an hour ago?
So why hurrying~?
Thanks for updating ♥︎