A Ghostly Twist

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Yoona wakes up from a coma after a few years. Her family showers her with love and concern but Yoona hates it and feels suffocated. She craves for freedom. To escape from her family's protectiveness, she decides to find a job. Yoona succeeds, and finds a job that is unique yet worrying. It would either heal Yoona's frustration at her loss of memories or destroy her entire being.

 

However, that is not the only factor. Yoona could see ghosts that no one else could after awaking from her coma. It's ghosts. And they are not just ordinary ghosts. They are characters from fairy tales but with a ghostly twist.

 

Her life is going to be turned upside down. 

 

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One section of the story:

 

She was utterly afraid.

 

And what could she do?

 

Absolutely nothing. And even if she did survive, she wasn’t sure if she wanted to live anyways. The world was being so cruel on her. It was absurd how she had been given a second chance at life after her coma, but yet wanted to give it up. 

 

It’s such an irony, a twist that was almost ghostly.

 

“Stop, you can’t do this…you’ll get caught for sure.” Yoona pleaded.

 

The murderer harrumphed. “I’ve planned this for so long and targeted you. Do you think that I would be scared of the police? I can’t get caught.”

 

Yoona knew that she couldn’t do nothing to stop this insane person. The police were in no capacity to help. And even if she managed to call them, the police would think she was crazy.

 

Yoona whimpered. “It doesn’t have to be this way. Why are you doing this?”

 

The murder’s eyes darkened with anger. “Must I have a reason for doing anything?”

 

Yoona placated him. “Aniyo, I was just curious. At least spare me this one detail before you kill me. Tell me why you have become like that.”

 

The murderer’s eyes rolled in exasperation. “Brat. I don’t know why I should but since this is your death wish, I’ll give you this privilege. However before that…”

 

The murderer moved quickly and agilely without sound and it scared Yoona that this person was so skillful. The murderer held a knife in one hand. Teeth was revealed in a sickening smile. The murderer slashed her arm, causing a cut that was deep enough to hurt but not deep enough to kill.

 

Yoona cried out. The pain blinded her. Her foggy mind could not function anymore. “Why are you targetting me?” Tears dripped from her doe eyes and she stared up at her killer. She grabbed a cloth and wrapped tightly around the wound, hissing wildly when the cloth came into contact with the fresh cut. 

 

The killer showed some mock pity and concern through patting Yoona’s head. “Aigoo, what to do? That was the price you had to pay for wanting to know my past story. I had to taint your precious skin.”

 

Yoona didn’t want to see the killer’s face, didn’t want to be scared, didn’t want to live. She was scared and tired beyond what is normal. She had seen too much.

 

She closed her eyes, ignoring the world and the stinging cut on her arm. She had just realized how insane yet powerful this person was. The way the killer slashed her arm showed experience.

 

Yoona cried. Her desolation and anger bounced off the walls and back to her. After all the times arguing with her parents that she was a big girl and didn’t need help, she was still a weakling.

 

“ you! you and your stupidness! I hate you. I put my trust in you and was nice and that’s how you treat me after all this while?” Yoona lashed out at the killer.

 

The murderer just gave Yoona a bored look. “Now shut up and let me grant your death wish. Then I shall kill you! And do you know how I will kill you?”

 

“How?”

 

“I shall let a big bad wolf come in, along with an old woman. The wolf listens to my commands and will eat the grandma before eating you!” The killer let out a joyful laugh.

 

Yoona’s eyes couldn’t widen much bigger at this rate. “Isn’t this the Little Red Riding Hood story?”

 

The killer smiled. “Bingo! Let me kill you the same way as I have killed many others. For I am the REAL Little Red Riding Hood, this shall be the curse that my victims shall die from!”

Foreword

Characters:

Im Yoona

Sweet, gentle.

Parents: Im Ryeowook (father), Im Sooyoung (mother)

 

Lee Donghae

Heir to Lee Corporations

Is hardened by life's experiences, puts on a brave facade 

Parents: Lee Sungmin (father), Lee Sunny (mother)

Brother and sister in law: Hyukjae and Hyoyeon

 

 

Other minor characters:

Jung Jessica

Kim Taeyeon

Kim Heechul

Kwon Yuri

Kangin

Seohyun

Cho Kyuhyun

Tiffany Hwang

Kim Kibum

 

A/N

There are 2 writers for this story: @yeahhh & @hormonalbibimbap. @yeahh comes up with the story, and @hormonalbibimbap edits! Throughout the story, you'll see comments in between like this: *xxxx*. These are of no relation to the story, and are just ual thoughts that came into our byuntae minds while we were writing the story. There won't be any here, (I know, what a downer!) but if that's what you guys want, we might consider. Comment and tell us! If you like our stories, please subscribe and upvote! If you know anyone who needs help with editing, please PM @hormonalbibimbap.

Each picture of the minor characters were chosen on purpose so kudos to you if you can guess it right. Thank you Love Stage graphic shop and NorthMelon who made this. Love ya! 

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tiarashinyoora #1
Chapter 8: too short.. :(
btw why she/he block your story?? if there is no reasonable grounds, don't mind them and continue the story,,
i support you... :)
tiarashinyoora #2
Chapter 7: i'm sorry typo..
i mean "how about her and donghae"
ㅋㅋㅋ
tiarashinyoora #3
Chapter 7: i'm scare yoona will die in the end of the story.....
but....how about her in donghae if she die...their fake relationship will end up just like that?
we will only know if u update story,
wait for your next update.. ^^
elis031089 #4
Chapter 6: Ong i thought it was siwon at first.. until the part she said that she is the Little Red Riding hood.. who will save her?? Donghae!!! Pls come!!
Hellomej #5
Chapter 6: :))))))))))))))))))))))))))) update soon! :)
tiarashinyoora #6
Chapter 6: taeyeon??omg..at first i think is siwon..
YoonHaeChoding #7
Chapter 6: I knew it , it's taeyeon! Donghae , please save Yoona T.T
YoonHaeChoding #8
Aww yoonhae <3 is taeyeon the murderer ?
tiarashinyoora #9
Chapter 5: ㅋㅋㅋ.... it's cute...
i'm curious why taeyeon really like to follow yoona??
Sprotte98
#10
Chapter 4: Thank you for your update, I hope the next one will come out soon because I really want to see how this story will go on!
Donghae looks soooo good I can't wait to know more about him! ♡