Chapter 5: Your story line is good but I think you have to give the girl a little flaw and not pamper her too much because in my opinion it might bore down the audience but yea your story line is good. Still reading it tho. Good luck!!!
Chapter 8: please make a story of ken where he and her crush are being set up by the other members. And she doesn't notice at all but actually has a little crush on him!
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