Luhan - Cross the Line
Personal Fanfic Recommendations (Mostly Luhan)
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Title: Cross the Line
Author: futuriste
Characters: Luhan + Yang Jae Hwa (OC)
Length: 8 (Completed)
Genre: Romance
Description: Roses are red, violets are blue. Even though you are my friend, can I fall in love with you?
Pros:
- Good story, advisable for quick read.
- I love how the two of them didn't hold back, because if ever they did, the story would be another of those cliche ones. (Read it to understand what I'm saying.)
- I love how this is realistic in a way.
- I love the short angst that was in the story.
Cons:
- Punctuation errors.
- The only think that got me confused is when it stated that they didn't know their feelings then in the next chapters, it was stated t
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