Luhan - Damsel Causing Distress
Personal Fanfic Recommendations (Mostly Luhan)Title: Damsel Causing Distress
Author: asianrye0127
Characters: Luhan + Yang Sojin (OC)
Length: 43 chapters (completed)
Genre: Romance, Friendship
Description: In which Luhan overcomes the responsibility during his first year, sustains the threat to relinquish the top pedestal by a strange rival, eludes as he realise the foreign sentiment brewing uncontrollably within him and surrenders as he is drowned in the crazy concoction that is his duty, rival-friend, growing affections and perhaps everything else.
Note: This is really a must read! I won't be surprised if this gets featured.
Pros:
- This is wonderfully written. I swear, it felt like as if I was reading a book.
- I never spotted any mistake in the entire story. Just wow
- The flow of the story was so consistent.
- The words used are in a whole new level. Not your typical story.
Cons:
- Personal preference, I don't like it when the story revolves around the OC. When it revolves around the girl OC, it's usually tells how the writer wants to be, like ridiculously pretty, famous, talented, smart and stuffs. Admit it, a lot of writers (even me) had put in traits and chracteristics of what they dream to be as the definition of the OC. I think the story somehow just ended up revolving around the OC even if the story is in Luhan's POV.
- The chapters are too lengthy (not that
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