Luhan - You Look Like My Dead Boyfriend
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Title: You Look Like My Dead Boyfriend
Author: yawmpitschiaa
Characters: Luhan + Yang Sanmi (You)
Length: 36 (Completed)
Genre: Romance, Angst
Description: You had a boyfriend named Lu who passed away. One day while working at the ice cream parlor with your best friends Kiyun and Woojun, you met a guy named Luhan who looked exactly like your dead boyfriend. What will happen next?
Pros:
- Good story and writing skills.
- Good chapter length, pretty lengthy.
- I love how Luhan was such a jerk here.
Cons:
- Typos everywhere.
- The switching of first person's POV to second person's POV accidentally.
- Punctuation errors.
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