Chapter 2

I can only say it in my heart

~ Yoseob's P.O.V~ 

-where is she? she's not comingg at this time- I thought and told Dongwoon to text her " arasso!" he answer simply.

"Yo guys! what's up? Dongwoon-ah, where's Yumi?" Junhyung ask us when he found us " I don't know either"  tell him . "yah! Im not talking to you! " he yelled.

yea, we fight a lot.! " im just being nice to you!" I yelled at him back. please, Junhyung-ah, Im not in the mood right now. " ya-"

he was about to yell at me again but then Dongwoon interupted " Guys! Yumi's in the hospital right now! "

what? it can't be. I know she's not really well this past 2 months. but, please!

we ran to the hospital.

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we've arrived but then we say Mrs Kim(Yumi's mom) was seating alone , crying. no way....

" mian, Mrs Kim, where's Yumi?"  Junhyung ask her. She seems to be shock when she saw us. She rub her eyes.

"she's in the  645 room .. her grandmother's .... d-" she said between her tears. " you don't have to tell us Mrs Kim " we completely know what does it mean. so we ran towards the room but stop when we heard a girl's scream - " PLEASE! DON'T LEAVE US! PLEASE! Please please~!" from the voice we knew it was Yumi.

I open the door and slowly walk toward Yumi. "Yumi-ah." she notice me and turn around "Y...Yoseob Oppa" and hug me tightly, still crying. " it's okay .. it's okay.." I told her to calm down. and she did.

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my second chapter is done! ^^ how was it? great? tell me! hee! 

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dontfreakmyboat
#1
hi ^^<br />
you have a really good plot and the suspence is working quite well, however you need to work on your grammar and spelling. it may not seem as obvious, but if you misspell words, forget to capitalize the first letter of a new sentence or use confusing grammar, it breaks up the story for the reader and it ruins the effect of the plot. another point to work on would probably be how quickly it moves along. the fact that her grandmother had a funeral the day after she died seems a little strange and puts off the rest of the chapter.<br />
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im sorry for being so picky but i still hope it helps > <"
Zeerahh #2
Thanks, Frozen. ^^
Zeerahh #3
Thanks! But I can't update now. my laptop are just... gah! I hate my laptop.. Im sorry.. But I'll update soon! no worries! ^^
EarthKid92195 #4
This fic is actually good! keep it up! :)Update too ^^