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┊〔 the нierarchy— possible leaders.

 
byun taeeun.
THE DEFIANT DIAMOND
#CHOSEN #SEHUN #MINHYUN #REBEL
 
` ( -MATOKI ) : so she's my character. bow down before her majestical glory.
 
` ( HOLYSENPAI ) : shine bright like a diamond / bOWs 
ugh sung sin is so purdy ; n ; /slapped orz
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
THE COLD CROWN
#CHOSEN #KAI #KIKWANG #ROYAL
 
` ( -MATOKI ) : bomi is a princeSS ok /kneeLS BC. too preddy ;U;.
 
` ( HOLYSENPAI ) : kneel before your queen, you peasants... juseyo.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 THE INTELLIGENT IRIS 
#ACCEPTED #ZELO #KRYSTAL #WALLFLOWER
 
` ( -MATOKI ) : hai jun c: thanks for being the first applicant! alright, to start off, your application overall was great, jangae sounds like a great leader of the wallflowers. her personality is good, and her background was extremely interesting and explained how jangae got to be this quiet girl. her relationship with krystal is truly different from other rivals i've seen c: dont even get me started in zelo omg and tbh i couldn't find any errors in your app o/ anyway, you're accepted by me < 3 and to answer that last question, we'll just interpret all their bg's into one otl
 
` ( HOLYSENPAI ) : coming soon! 
 
 
 
 
THE AEGYO APHRODITE
#ACCEPTED #HOYA #LIZZY #KIND
 
` ( -MATOKI ) : hai gaby c: first off, i wanna ask how she knows all those languages? and can you keep them down to four langages please? thanks. also, for the birthdays, please add in their months and days, not just the years. and for the ulzzangs as friends, i'd rather you change them to oc's, mostly because people might apply with those face claims. also, in the trivia section, can you delete those little notes that say '6+ optional reasons', etc. etc.? thanks for fixing! you're accepted now c: thanks for applying, dear < 3 + crushes are like minor love interests, where your character was in love with them for a short amount of time.
 
` ( HOLYSENPAI ) : coming soon!
 
 
 
 
THE PERKY PRANKSTER
#ACCEPTED #YONGGUK #JR #CLASS CLOWN
 
` ( -MATOKI ) : hai amira c: to get started on things, i wanna say that ami is freakin' hilarious, and she would be a great addition to the class clowns. it's great that she has some flaws, especially that adhd one, it doesn't make her a compete mary sue. tbh when i got to the trivia part, i was laughing like a maniac, it was really creative, what you did with it. jr and ami's relationship seems pretty realistic, he's an overlord and she is the pushover that makes the relationship sort of work. and yongguk with ami is like a match made in heaven ;; your application is perfect, so you're accepted by me < 3 thanks so much for applying c:
 
` ( HOLYSENPAI ) : coming soon!
 
 
 
 
THE INSPIRATION
#ACCEPTED #MINHO #BORA #ROYAL
 
` ( -MATOKI ) : yo miko o/ let's start the review c: alright, so, i love how you had just the right amount of quantity and quality in both rian's background and personality. her background was realistic and the way you interpreted sehun into the background was too good. bora and minho's relationship with rian seems realistic as well, which is another element i loved about your app ;; also sorry for the super late review ps yes there is < 3 'NUFF SAID YOU'RE ACCEPTED BYE /dies from your radiance
 
` ( HOLYSENPAI ) : coming soon!
 
 
 
 
THE INSPIRATION
#ACCEPTED #SUHO #AILEE #WALLFLOWER
 
` ( -MATOKI ) : hai didi c: thanks for applying! alright, let's get started, first off, i like hanako's personality, it's really unique because of her cover with the outfits & her hidden personality :D your writing style is unique, i haven't read an app like yours. hanako sounds like a good leader of the wallflowers. the only negative thing i could see is that your app is a bit short. i won't dock you for that, though, so you're accepted by me. almost forgot about the year & age orz. even though she's a freshman, she's 16, so she'd have to be a junior. so pls fix that and by <3
 
` ( HOLYSENPAI ) : coming soon!  
 
 
 
 THE OMITTED OUTSIDER
#ACCEPTED #LUNA #MINHO #KIND
 
` ( -MATOKI ) : hai again didi cx let's just start off with the years he, minho and luna are in, because he's a freshman, but he's 17. he'd be a senior by then, though, so can you pls change those ty. /coughs but since that's pretty much the only thing that annoys me about it, let's go for the good things o/ I loved his background with the modeling & asdfghjkl. it's definitely unique, i haven't seen one app like this before cx i won't complain about it being short bc firefox, so you're accepted by mee o/ pls wait patiently for senpai's review <3
 
` ( HOLYSENPAI ) : coming soon!
 
 
 
▲ THE SOCIAL SWEETIE
#ACCEPTED #HYUNA #HYUNSEUNG #WALLFLOWER
 
` ( -MATOKI ) : hai nell c: it's alright if you're applying as a dude if you're a girl. let's get started on the review with how he's 18 but is also a sophomore. if he were 18, in this story, he'd be a senior, so can you pls change that tenkyu and that's the only bad thing i could see ok. i like that he's korean and russian, it's really creative c: when i first read about nell's & hyuna's relationship, i laughed bc they were cute together cx anyway, your app was nice to read, so you're accepted by me. please anticipate senpai's review o/
 
` ( HOLYSENPAI ) : coming soon!
 
 
 
 
 THE SOCIAL SWEETIE
#ACCEPTED #JUNIEL #JR #KIND
 
` ( -MATOKI ) : hai rina < 3 (your name is pretty omf) thanks so much for applying, now let's get to the review o/ i love jaehwan's background and personality, they were really written and original. but the thing i like most about it was jr and jaehwan's relationship omo. the fact that a girl made them turn on each other made me laugh. such petty boys (brohohoo~). and juniel is so sweet just reading about her ohmylove. so basically i love you and you're accepted bye ; u ;
 
` ( HOLYSENPAI ) : coming soon!
  
 
 
 
 
 THE INTELLIGENT IRIS
#ACCEPTED #ALICE #SIWAN #ARTIST
 
` ( -MATOKI ) : hai bee c: let's get started with the review o/ alright first i wanna point out the bad things in your application, which are nonexistent- /coughs alright now that that's done- oh wait ;; you just forgot to fill out the allies part, but that was pretty much it o u ob anyway, i liked the amazing background, it was totally unique, i loved it ;; anD THE LOVE INTEREDT SECTION OH GOD IT MADE ME GET INTO HELLO VENUS MORE ; U ; ok coughs you're accepted let me go cry
 
` ( HOLYSENPAI ) : coming soon!
 
 
 
  
 THE TYPICAL TRANSFEREE
#ACCEPTED #XIUMIN #SULLI #WALLFLOWER
 
` ( -MATOKI ) : hello, alia cx i can already tell your app is amazing tbvh- your writing skills are impeccable ;; i loved reading your app, and i also love how i could picture mihyun interacting with sulli and xiumin, actually. i could actually see her being an honest girl who is under the radar all the time and is pretty smart, unless she's a burnout lol. to be honest, i can't find anything wrong with your application, so you're accepted, dear c:
 
` ( HOLYSENPAI ) : coming soon!
 
  
 
  
 
 THE AEGYO APHRODITE
#ACCEPTED #ONEW #JONGHYUN #KIND
 
` ( -MATOKI ) : hey hey anan c: it's nice seeing your haeun's sort of the girly type, which is what i hope you were going for e u e;; plus the bg and personality were really good, i could can see that in a story outside of this one o n o the love interest section + love rival section made me fangirl tbh bc the shinee love triangle oh gosh. no one writes about shinee anymore so you have me on your side a little ; v ; and to answer your questions, no you're alright with the friends, and the allies can be your friends from other cliques u v u also you're accepted dear ;;
 
` ( HOLYSENPAI ) : coming soon!
 
 
 
 THE INSPIRATION
#CHOSEN #KRYSTAL #SEHUN #ROYALS
 
` ( -MATOKI ) : hi hi hongmine c: i remember we talked about your app and it's just as good as i thought it would be e u e LMAO THE WAY YOU DESCRIBED HIS PERSONALITY & BG ithinkimoncrack wasitrlythatfunny c oughs ok reading the trivia section made me craugh;; especially the taeeun part cries. but most of all, reading the rival & love interest sections got to me, ohgod- you're chosen, so i'm gonna go die in a hole now bai ; AAA ; 
 
` ( HOLYSENPAI ) : coming soon!
 
 
 
 
 THE INSPIRATION
#CHOSEN #KRIS #AEGYO APHRODITE #DIVAS
 
` ( -MATOKI ) : hi rin ;; byul's fashion sense is really simple and loose, i like how you described it. she has an interesting personality - mostly made of flaws - which is a good thing, most people should probably have the luxury of being imperfect otl. her background is nice, nothing too out-of-the-ordinary and over-the-top. weeeeeps can i hug you i really can't see any mistakes except some little typos here and there ;A; hanbyul's sure to be a star in this story- /winkwonk see what i did there? see? because byul- /coughs. ok no bad jokes aside, you've been chosen, dear ♡
 
` ( HOLYSENPAI ) : coming soon!
  
 
 
 THE AS5HO7E ATHLETE
#ACCEPTED #CHORONG #YONGGUK #ROYALS
 
` ( -MATOKI ) : hai aki o/ ok first off, i want to say that w0w your face claim is pretty- i mean handsome ;; and he's also very tall for a korean high school boy. he's kinda underweight too, can you change that please? his personality and background, i see, are short and sweet, but they're still good in quality. i like his story although it's a little sad with his mom and everything ;n; i think he'd make the story quite interesting, after reading over your application again accepted, thanks for applying! ㅇㅅㅇ ♡
 
` ( HOLYSENPAI ) : coming soon!
 
 
 
 
 THE AS5H07E ATHLETE
#PENDING #EUNJI #HOYA #ROYALS
 
` ( -MATOKI ) : yeEEEP more athletes ;u; /coughs hi there ailee o/ let's start the review, shall we? omf- i read your application twice, it's really good c': man the way you described him made me hate him and love him (orz does that make sense). i'm pretty sure if i were to incorporate seungjoo in the other character's lives then they'd all have mixed feelings about this boy xD anyway! what got to me was the rivalry section, honestly speaking. and usually it's the love interest part that i like the most 3 his relationship with hoya is great, friendly rivalries are my favorite kind ;; i think he's a pretty interesting character that i'll consider putting in the story, so you're accepted c: ♡
 
` ( HOLYSENPAI ) : coming soon! 
 
 
 
 
 THE AS5H07E ATHLETE
#ACCEPTED #LUNA #MINHO #PREPS
 
` ( -MATOKI ) : yeeeep yes more athletes ;u; /clears throat. ok hi jane c: let's get started- eeEeeEEP LONG APPS I LOVE IT ♡ /coughs i have a feel of what his life and personality are like, something along the lines of, 'i'm a ladies' man and and loving it' kinda guy xD it fits the plotline, there's another thing i like. and the rivalry section makes me want to swoon ; u ; competitive minho vs. arrogant hyunjae sounds very interesting, hm... / nonexistent beard. also the relationship between luna and hyunjae is so cuuuuute <3333 psh it's obvious you're accepted, dear ;;
 
` ( HOLYSENPAI ) : coming soon!
 
 
 
 
 THE OMMITED OUTSIDER
#ACCEPTED #IU #BAEKHYUN #WALLFLOWERS
 
` ( -MATOKI ) : hey there, yuna c: last applicant anticipation, i presume? heuheu ok let's start reviewing o/ i'm sure frigging joonki could pass as a rebel if he needed to;; with his looks and personality, i'm pretty sure he was mistaken as a rebel once or twice???? coughs ok back to the review- i really liked the trivia section, because he's kind of like me (#concieted /smacked). joonki and iu would look good together, their relationship is absolutely adorable and i can't help but picture the two together OTL. /sniffles. well, this is the end of reviews for everyone. it was fun while it lasted a really freaking long time. you're accepted, dear, i loved the whole thing ;AAaA;
 
` ( HOLYSENPAI ) : coming soon!
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 PLOTLINE
#STATUS #INTEREST #RIVAL #CLIQUE
 
` ( -MATOKI ) : coming soon!
 
` ( HOLYSENPAI ) : coming soon!
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
TOTAL : 17
THE COLD CROWN - | THE AEGYO APHRODITE - 2 | THE DEFIANT DIAMOND -
THE TYPICAL TRANSFEREE - 1 | THE PERKY PRANKSTER - 1 | THE INTELLIGENT IRIS  - 2
THE AS5H07E ATHLETE - 3 | THE SOCIAL SWEETIE - 2 | THE OMITTED OUTSIDER - 2
THE INSPIRATION - 4
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