The Sky Can't Hold Us

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The Sky Can't Hold Us
By deliberatemistake;
"I have never fallen and you are always falling..."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
You’re beautiful, boy; beautiful in the ways I never understood. What is it about you that makes me feel so insecure when I have enough ego to stock the subway stairs you trip across every day. I thought nothing could break me, until you got hurt and I watched myself in the mirror - guilty, so very guilty.


What have I done?



I have sinned, and I can’t forgive myself, much less ask for forgiveness from you.



We danced where no one could see us, in shadows and cracks, between rocks and realities. Ankles aching, breaths heaving - I wanted to bow out but you begged me to stay, even though it meant you'd get hurt.



What have you done?



You have saved me in ways I didn’t know I could be saved.

 
 

 

 

 

 

Foreword

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

Of yellows and ultramarines; of attractions you can't deny, and denials you can't comprehend.

 

He is the first to fall

and

He is the first to leave

He knows they’ll last

and

He is the last to know

 


Reviewed by: AnExoticShawol from Toheart Request Shop.

 

Contest entry for: CONTEST - ♢For Infinite: Eternal Inspirits♢

 

Prompt: Shadow - f(x)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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perplexing
#1
ooo i love this
infiniterainbow
#2
Chapter 10: This story is so beautiful, so full of love, and so wonderfully told I can't help but shed tears all throughout.
We can never really fully grasp the mystery that is love, and we can only have an idea once we feel it ourselves.
I enjoyed this story so much I finished it in one sitting!
MyungJong is really my ultimate OTP, but I also love how there are hints of my other OTPs, such as Woojong, Yeoljong, WooYeol and WooSoo! ;3
KaihleeLo
#3
Chapter 10: Myungsoo's mom remind me of my mom xD Anywho, love this chapter (just like any). The ending was great and special as it gives us many messages to ponder about~ I love the story overall! It was interesting, funny, intense, great, and I just love each character xD It's interesting to see a strong or more manly Sungjong versus Myungsoo xD And then there's a Woohyun who actually gives advice rather than poking fun at the others~ Anyway thank you for writing such a great story with a great storyline and plot. I honestly enjoyed it!

-Infinite Contest
KaihleeLo
#4
Chapter 9: DAW! I went on a roller coaster ride in this chapter >.< It was funny yet adorable and cute at the same time xD
KaihleeLo
#5
Chapter 8: WOOYEOL AND OMIGOD I LOVE THIS CHAPTER xD
KaihleeLo
#6
Chapter 7: I remember that accident T_T Anywho Idunno how to feel bout this chapter but I'm sure Sungjong has his reasons >.< And Myungsoo is indeed loyal and faithful~
KaihleeLo
#7
Chapter 6: Sungyeol always breaks the seriousness of the atmosphere xD Which is cute lol. Woohyun the best friend is too cool xD
KaihleeLo
#8
Chapter 5: Aaw beautiful chapter xD Sungjong is really the man and I love it so much XD
KaihleeLo
#9
Chapter 4: Aish I can't stop loving Sungjong >.< And Sungyeol is too funny lol xD Good job Woohyun!
KaihleeLo
#10
Chapter 3: Oh dear Sungjongie. Woohyunie is too observant. >.<