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When Spring Meets Winter

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Designer: Amaeteur

 

Reviewer: Xiuminbaozi99

 

Date: 00/00/00

 

First impression: 10/10
As soon as I opened your poster, it made my jaws drop. It's rather simple, but so well put together that I was mesmerized.

I apologize in advance for such a short review I will give you. I really have nothing to point out.

Poster layout: 10/10

Font: 5/5

Character layout: 5/5

Colour scheme: 5/5

Mood: 4.5/5
In the request form, you described the OC as spring and Sehun as winter, so I expected a big contrast between the way you portray them which you didn't. It hard to tell spring and winter apart. Perhaps a tweak of color scheme around the OC or her expression would enhance the 'lively' girl who resembles spring. A tinge of blue can be added to the 'cold and distant' Sehun who resembles winter.

Overall looks: 9.5/10
Everything looks great, but when I closely examined the poster,  I noticed a little abnormality. There is a sharp cut in the area to the right of Sehun's forehead, near the edge. I am not 100% sure but I believe it is a small blending error at where two textures meet/overlap.

Total score: 49/50
This poster is absolutely breathtaking! The color scheme is mysterious and compelling, the font and characters are elegantly selected, the textures are very well blended and looks natural. You did a VERY great job. Good luck in your future works, you have great potential!

Thank you for requesting from us. Keep up the good job :)

 

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Rover_Orphaned #1
Chapter 74: Hey,
Thanks for the review. Especially considering it is a long read and not your particular cup of tea. Now that the story is already a few weeks old, I agree with you and a few other reviewers that it dragged on a little too long. But overall, not too shabby for a first attempt. ;) I've credited you in the foreword. ^^
XOXO Mirre
amaeteur #2
Chapter 76: thank you so much for the review! :) i was a bit nervous when i clicked open the chapter... hahah
and yes i think thats a blending error, i dint notice it at first HAHAh thank you for pointing it out!!

once again, thank you for the review! will come back for more in the future~ :)
FlowerySpeech #3
Chapter 71: Thank you for the review :D
paulmccartney #4
Thanks for the review! Picked up :D I don't actually have a shop here, but I have a gallery on a different site, if you'd like me to link..? If not, I can just post it on my profile. I don't know...:/
Once again, thanks! :)
sognatore-xo
#5
I requested a graphic review not sure if it went through though.
amaeteur #6
hello! requested and upvoted. looking forward to the review! :)
paulmccartney #7
I've submitted a request! :)
Jinhwanderer
#8
Chapter 70: Hanbin didnt struggle with the workload per se, but with himself and his lost passion. It is a story that would be pretty difficult to understand if you didn't follow ikon/team b in their survival shows and if you didnt experience the struggles that came with it, since it is canon. I do agree with some of your points though. And as for Jinhwan, I know he is a huge mystery but I wanted to leave it that way to have the readers feel the same as Hanbin. He, too, didn't know much about the boy.Btw, what do you mean by sidebar? And thanks for the review. I'll credit you when I get on my PC ^^
tsinaee
#9
Chapter 68: thank you so much! i'll work hard on this, your opinions and response really helped me :) thank you again!