Hello there, here is deedee_zelo90 reviewer. I am sorry you have waited for a long time, I have been busy Mattoki owner have reminded me today so even though I am busy I'll try and do your request. Hope I wont be too harsh. If you have some questions regarding your review please don't hestiate to pm me. :)

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Title:

Title for your story isn't unique, its too much overused as I have done researching I think everybody have used a title for their own stpies with the same exact title. It didn;t sound so much appealing to me but somehow its revelant to your story.

Grade: 6/10

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Description/ Foreword:

I am stunned. But in good way of course. I haven't caught any gramatic, spelling error or punctation; maybe is because I am still trying to improve my own english...But honestly, everything was perfect. I loved how your have written description and foreword. Foreword was even better! You putted a prologue and uder it A/N of course and also you putted advices from review shops! Amazing! I think Nobody did such thing like you did. :D                             

Grade: 10/10

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Grammar: 
 

Your grammar is perfect I didnt needed to stop and think what you have tried to say like on some other reviews. Your story was such an joy for me to read, it was relaxing, it was like I was in heaven.

Grade: 10/10

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