Hey... xoxoChocie here :) Sorry it took so long!!! forgiveness??

Title: Forbidden

Link To Story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/751313/

Author: imyourbestfriend24

Status: Complete

Length: one shot

Genre:angst

Reviewer: xoxoChocie

Title: 9/10
It may have been one word and used quite a bit, but the way in which you used it is very captivating and suits your story very well. it leaves a person wondering about what is forbidden.

Description/ Forward: 10/10
I have to say, you definately have a talent in writing forewords (i am so jelous, i sucl at it!!!). The layout is simple yet very beautiful and the wording used is perfect and suitable for the story!!!

Grammar: 9/10
This is the art i hate the most and i hate reading sstuff that is gramatically incorrect but, It was perfect and nothing bothered me here.

Spelling: 10/10
No spelling erros at all. Well done!!!

Flow and Pace: 9/10
It is always hard to review flow and pace of a one shot beacuse it is very short, but in your case it was very well done and the pace was not too fast or to slow

Character Developement: 9/10
I cant really say much since this is a one shot but,the character development was really good. You got to know the characters very well.

Plot: 10/10
Honestly, i have never read anything about on AFF before ( or i wasnt looking properl